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Hush, Baby...

Hush, Baby..
Won't you stop your crying?
Mummy can't think properly anymore,
All she hears is your screams.

Hush, Baby..
Now you've made Mummy cry.
What is it that you want?
Is my love and care not good enough?

Hush, Baby..
I have to make you stop.
Mummy can't handle you crying anymore.

Hush, Baby..
While I place this pillow
over your sweet, innocent face.

Hush, Baby..
Now you are with the Angels..

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  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    August 15, 2008

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    very powerful write, truly amazing. =] It flowed very nicely and was quite well written as well. Wonderful write

    x-Pretty-Odd-x <3


  • zillion
    July 16, 2008
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    very representative of our society. Very heinous.


  • demonic66
    July 10, 2008
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    wow


  • CharcoalScreams
    July 9, 2008
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    Thank you.
    Love you too
    MWAH x


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 9, 2008
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    wow this is amazing baby girl, really astounding. Love you xoxox

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