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Stayed Tall

He doesn’t know how to die in my love
So I gave him the deepest kiss!!!
To swell his soul, dancing heartbeats
Warm violet blossomed wet
To pass behind his ear with my lips
Then to blow pass his neck with
A season wind
As I felt his arms like a
Drip of rain coming out from
Morn sweet day clouds
So that he can lie in
My fields and surrender
To my scent
All day
Underneath no other shine
I blossomed the lamp
as his eyes glowed
Underneath its warmth
though I drowned him
with bountiful passion
this rose still stayed tall...










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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 30

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    Oh! this is really nice.. Ireally loved the flow of this.. and the imagery was just so detailed and beautiful too.. the emotion is really sweet and loving.. I really loved this. you did a wonderful job.. I'm sure that you wooed my lover! thank you very much for sharing. I really enjoyed reading this.. best of luck!

    Angel