I saw your face
against the backdrop of
a clouded sienna dawn
with bright golden light
that emanated
from the throne of God,
my soul searched for
many answers
to questions not yet asked
as eternity called my name.
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 12, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful
cannot believe you only got bronze. well done!
Write On!
jIM
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Hmmm...I'm not really sure what to say to this one...there's too much emotion evoked in me to do anything but sputter in wonder...
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This was really different.. I mean there was a lot of emotion in this write.. And it had this dark feeling to it but I really liked it.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best ofluck..
Angel
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A very different take on the prompt...
my soul searched for
many answers
to questions not yet asked..
Very deep thoughts here, I have bookmarked to read again.
Juls
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I read this before the photo came up. I first thought you were refering to a woman, whom you just fell in love with. Looking at her and wondering what the future will bring. Now I see the photo and that too fits. The only thing that doesn't sound quite right is the 'and' in the last line. I read it as a continuation from "As my soul.... Not sure how I would alter it, or if it is just me reading it wrong. Reagardless. This was well written and enjoyable. Best of luck in the contest.
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What a fabulous take on the picture!! Think this holds so much depth, and takes the picture to a whole new level which I think other writes will not!
Awesome!
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I read this in quickies before I saw the picture and your words brought something different to mind but having seen the complete package I must congratulate you on your choice of words.
Best of luck in the contest dear.
Love Margaret
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Beautiful! Great take on the picture!
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