You're On My Mind.
Feelings occur.
Feelings of love.
Happiness.
Joy.
Certainty.
Butterflies.
Love.
You're on my mind.
Every day.
Every hour.
Every minute.
Every second.
You're on my mind.
Your smile.
Your touch.
Your thoughts.
Your expressions.
Your honesty.
Your beauty.
You're mine.
You're on my mind.
Distance could never separate these feelings.
Ever.
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A very beautiful write. It repeats a lot, but I like that. It just puts more and more emphasis on the feelings of love you have. I think we all have that someone that we can't get off of our minds. Loved it.
Warmest,
Mylee -
i liked this. love so easily explained. nicely done!
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wow
The feelings in this poem are deep and are ver sweet. I could feel every line and I like how the poem flowed.
The repitition of "you're on my mind" adds to the effect and it seems like this person is always within you. lovely message!!
transit~
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Good
I like this poem a lot and I can definitely relate to it you did very well -
hii
aww, this is a sweet poem.
I like it alot.
hmm. great job. =] =]
Isn't love great??
xXx-xXx
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