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The Death of My Misery and Regrets

A rose turned black
By the coldness of night
This night,
This dark night,
The rose must fade
I wish for the knife to take my misery
So through the veins,
I drag the blade

So weak
are the words
I say to you now
Our love is nothing,
But a painful mistake
But im letting go,
Of all my regrets
With evey silent breath I take

My vision is getting blurry,
And I can barely breathe
That is how I know
This is the end of life,
My last moment,
I say good bye.
...and thankyou,
My blood stained knife

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  • MorbidDarkness
    August 3
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    I love this talented write so powerful intense with emotion so beautiful

  • Venugopal silver member
    July 13
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    Sad but expressed beautiful I wonder at the emo you brought..intence..keen..Very good poem indeed