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Aesthetics

                              I

I see the twisted, stunted dogwood bloom
with blossoms white and of the palest pink
against a wooded hill in shaded gloom:
No greater beauty is, than this, I think.

Yet I recall sequoias in the sky,
and slender redwood giants by the sea,
the ponderosas on the mountains high,
and regal cypress with a court of knees.

The trees I’ve seen in every climate seem
to grace their scenes with beauty unsurpassed.
By what aesthetic standard may I deem
that one is less or greater than the last?

Their grace I may admire but not begrudge:
The trees were never made for me to judge.


                             II

An ocean stretched around me, sky to sky.
Translucent green resolved to opaque blue:
With distance as a prism for my eye,
I saw each sequent wave unique in hue.

The plains rise up in flowing robes of gold
with sparkling threads of winding sapphire streams.
Their emerald garters gather rolling folds
where blooms in garnet and of amber gleam.

The rolling seas and waves of prairie grass
beneath their vaulted skies of endless blue
would overwhelm me with horizons vast
if not for gifts of minute beauty, too.

When views exceed the limits of my eyes
exquisite grace in finitude still lies.


                            III

I am a human of a certain kind
that gave its forms and features to my own.
I love the beauty of my race defined
by qualities I share in flesh and bone.

We see through eyes of hazel, brown and blue,
from faces ebon black to ivory white.
We say this form or that is beauty true
when blind to all but native culture’s sight.

Yet humankind exists in multitudes
of multifaceted diversity.
The concepts of our race’s pulchritude
are as diverse as our humanity.

The beauty of our kind with all its grace
is found in every kind of human face.

Author notes

The great American plains with their vast horizons have not been far from my door for most of my life. I love their llanos, rolling hills and grasslands green or gold depending on the season. I have been to sea surrounded by blue above below and on every side, but with no single color at my feet or to the farthest edge of sight. It has been my good fortune to enjoy the stillness of marshy glens and deep forests, the magnificence of breath-taking mountains and the stark grace of desert canyons.

My heritage is American, with the blood of British, Cherokee and Choctaw nations mixed in my veins, surging from my heart. My extended family of marriage and blood includes the genetic legacy of Africa, Europe, Southeast Asia and the peoples of America. I have heard voices I could not understand but thrilled to hear with their cadences from lips, tongue and throat unheard in my own native English. The hands and arms of love and good will which have touched mine have been of every hue from ivory white to ebon black.

I cannot judge beauty, but I will love it.
Peripatic, aka Ben Mosley

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  • zappa gold member
    October 28
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    Very Beautiful and inspiring Poem.

  • Great truths so well expressed. I am very much enjoying your writing.

  • Purrsanthema
    February 24
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    You probably deserved a platinum.

  • Purrsanthema
    February 24

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    Line 10 in the first sonnet: " To grace their scenes with beauty unsurpassed" .What a beautiful line! In the first stanza I love the image of the dogwood you've painted.
    What a wonderful sweep you get to " And slender redwood giants by the sea". Sonnet 2:what a wonderful picture of the prairie: I with my ancestors from the steppes love it too! That line "The rolling seas and waves of prairie grass" is just magnificent. It moves the way the wind moves the grasses. As for sonnet 3: BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a wonderful poem! And how creative to tie the earth there so seamlessly into ourselves!!!!!!!!! It is no chore to comment!!!!!! If you want to fuss with line 3 of sonnet one you probably could: cypress, each with bended knee, or some such thing,: you must be the judge as to whether you want to get a perfect rhyme here.

  • Bad Bill
    February 8

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    A literate and beautifully-written trio of sonnets and a well-deserved gold winner. Excellent work.

    Bill


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    February 7

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    Exceptional writing! This is what I asked for in this contest...imagery, passion...A very enjoyable read. Well done.
    Rory


  • Sunshine Always
    January 24
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    What can I say except breathtakingly beautiful.....mal


  • Jaden silver member
    January 4
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    I like the classical style . . . attentiveness to the language.


  • Bean Sidhe silver member
    December 28, 2008

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    Thank you for following my simple contest rules!

    Obviously, having won a gold trophy for this piece already, you must be well aware of the stature and beauty of it. The last line is simply breathtaking.

    Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest


  • Sagittarius silver member
    December 23, 2008

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    Exceptional write my friend.

    A New Englander, I too am blessed with a panorama of nature that never ceases to stir me, not make me realize just how insignificant I am amongst all this vast beauty.

    Sag

  • judmc
    December 23, 2008

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    Exceptional

    A poem beautifully crafted with exceptional imagery
    delicately expressed well worth the gold, George


  • Death of the Author
    November 28, 2008

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    By what aesthetic standard may I deem
    That one is less or greater than the last?

    Their grace I may admire but not begrudge:
    The trees were never made for me to judge. -

    There is a contest at the moment about the word Pulchritude, even if you can't enter this I'm pretty damn sure that the contest host would love to read it.


  • aparnaagarwal
    October 28, 2008
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    BEAUTIFULL
    LOVE
    APARNA


  • aparnaagarwal
    October 28, 2008
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    A VERY GOOD POE


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    exeptional in quality

    the poetry in this is superb, truly elegant, your imagry is so clear it really paints a picture for me to see. I love words, they make my soul sing, such a gift they are, and yours were were so well chosen they merged together colours on an artists palate if this were a painting I would hang it on my wall, thankyou for the pleasure take care and godbless littlefishone


  • Lamia
    October 3, 2008

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    I loved this poem. I live in a place where the forest and mountains meet the prairie so I have a very clear image of what you're talking about. Your rhyming is impeccable and the flow makes this work a joy to read. Congrats on your trophy and thank you for your kind words on my poem


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 28, 2008

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    Wonderful triple sonnet with the sonnets relating almost as the traditional stanzas of a Shakespearean relate. I'm almost tempted to ask if you thought of adding a Sonette or sixain as a kind or extended couplet to sum it up.
    Wonderful stuff from a terrific writer, thank-you for making the judging even harder!!!
    Great stuff


  • Damien 666
    September 15, 2008

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    amazing write, i dont want to sound thick but obveously we are nature, we characterise from the past whilst growing with evolution. No different to a tree, a blade of grass, rock carved from wind, volcano's made through the earth living. we are evolution and we are a symbol of our past. diverse and never the same but always an equal in every righ


  • Exit-Stage-Right
    September 1, 2008

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    A richly deserved gold.... great vocab, rhyme, meter and message. The third sonnet was a bit of a surprise after the first two, tied into the poem more by the title than an easy segue from the second sonnet. Still, a magnificent piece of work.


    • Peripatetic gold member
      September 1, 2008
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      Thanks! I suppose the 3rd sonnet is more the moral of the first two rather than simply another observation on the nature of beauty. People were never made for me to judge; and while the vast sea of humanity often has its own terrible and sometimes overwhelming beauty, the individuals of our race are the ones who give it the grace we can embrace.


  • Darkwell
    August 27, 2008

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    oh this was lovely just exquisity lovely about beauty being everywhere and you just gotta look to find it.

    The trees I’ve seen in every climate seem
    To grace their scenes with beauty unsurpassed.
    By what aesthetic standard may I deem
    That one is less or greater than the last?

    i love this part that why is one more beautiful then the other question. they all have their own quality. my freinds are a rainbow of colors and their all beautiful this sonnets really about looking inside you to find beauty and to be open to finding it in everything and everyone, i really love that thought. plus as always its fun reading your stuff because you rock with words too except i had to dictionary pulchritude

    The beauty of our kind with all its grace
    Is found in every kind of human face.

    you so rock


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    The Elms die but are buried upright
    Like parsees
    Sloghs of bark
    Lie at their feet
    A batch
    Of undelivered letters

    Their side seams gape

    Everyone lives in these crannies
    The critters have picked out
    A textbook in Braille

    The racoons have scribed graffiti
    It is a dusty holding
    Except in the January thaw, when
    A host of old velvet feet comes forth
    A congregation of sweet wet mushrooms
    Nodding their caps
    In prayer.

    nature is to be adored by the pen
    I loved what you wrote

    • Peripatetic gold member
      August 24, 2008

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      Thank you for sharing "In the Company of Trees". Where this poem observes and celebrates beauty with decorous reserve, your imagery displays the comfortable familiarity of close and warm friendship.


  • xwarriorXprincessx
    August 15, 2008

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    such soul.

    there is so very much heart and soul in this piece. the descriptions are so wonderful and lovely.
    this. is. absolutely. beautiful.

    i don't know what to say beyond that. i couldn't possibly express where this poem took me. but it infact took me there. this made me want to meditate in such a place. and i'm willing to bet it would be easily done.

    wonderful writing. absolutely wonderful.

    thank you so much for this beautiful entry.

    excellent write. best wishes and best of luck!

    • Peripatetic gold member
      August 23, 2008
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      You have read this poem well, not as my contemplations of what I find beautiful, but as an encouragement to find the beauty within and around you. Most of us have some place in our memories, in art or in the world we can touch where we go to center ourselves on the path through life. I hope this helps you move toward yours should you ever find yourself in need of a hand or a thought to get there.


  • poetic-enigma21
    July 12, 2008

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    oh yes ...these are my favorite lines
    We see through eyes of hazel, brown and blue,
    From faces ebon black to ivory white.
    We say this form or that is beauty true
    When blind to all but native culture’s sight

    • Peripatetic gold member
      July 12, 2008
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      The first face we see and the first eyes we peer into as newborns are the first we find beautiful. The concept of beauty would be tragically restricted and eventually lost to us if we never learned to appreciate the range of what and who is beautiful beyond that first awareness.

  • poetic-enigma21
    July 12, 2008
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    wow, your author notes tell me how come you are capable of writing such a brilliant piece, indeed beautiful and descriptive beyong words.
    i appriciate your use of vivid colors describing the fold of beautiful moments with seasons, and the way you look at it.
    superb work
    thanks a lot for sharing
    best of luck in the contest
    cheers

  • celadia
    July 10, 2008
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    This is a publishable piece definately, this is pro quality. i love it, I love it, I love it.

    • Peripatetic gold member
      July 10, 2008
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      Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. This is one of my personal favorites.
      I've found many poetry journals reject almost out of hand poetry with form, rhythm or rhyme simply because it includes those poetic elements. It's considered trite or clever. But then, I haven't submitted this one. Who knows?
      Following the lead of poets past and present I've self-published a book of poetry which includes "Aesthetics". I don't know the 4 or 5 persons who have purchased it on-line, but I'm glad they did! With sales to friends and family and those kind strangers I'll make back the cost of publishing in another couple of years! Whoo hoo!

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