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My Robot self

Oh my god,
Look at me,
As robot I can be,
I was born human,
Taken away,
Into a robo body.

Oh my god,
How I changed,
from moody,
to boring
I'v lost interest in me
This life is so boring,
we just work like crazy.

It was fun to play around when i was human
I wish i was taken back
instead of being chosen.

I am a robot now becoming fully

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  • Going Forever
    October 10, 2008

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    This is great.

    Oh my god,
    Look at me,
    As robot I can be,
    I was born human,
    Taken away,
    Into a robo body.

    They were my absolute favourite lines!!!


    Magikal Fairy Poet


  • onesugar gold member
    July 10, 2008

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    Thank you for this take on the prompt
    I liked the ending
    Good luck and thank you for entering
    ~sugar~