It feels like...
Bitter without the sweet
Rain without the clouds
a flower without petals.
It feels like...
A night sky without stars
A pencil without paper
An ocean without waves
A colorless world without feeling.
I drift through wave after wave of emptiness.
My heart has no rhythm to beat,
No life to pump through my veins.
I have no words to speak,
No thoughts to write down.
I'm incomplete...
I'm lost without you.
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I bet a lot of people could relate to this...
Tell me how it made you feel.
Whaddya think?
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You just described the start of this year (for me.)
yay coma.
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"Yay coma"!?? Lol.
Yep. It seems that these past years have all been quite comatose for lots of us in 'the group.' Damn teenagers.
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Fantastic
Absolutely true! what a fantastic piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading it, and i can so relate to it. You are describing a large portion of my life. Great write. ((hugs))
Dena
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Oh wow! You are soooooo right I can relate to this on every level!
You have officially written the words I could never say!
I both congratulate you and thank you for this brilliance!
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i cant say i can relate to it completely, but in some ways i can. i cant really describe what is i like about it, i just really enjoyed reading it. it definatly has a very nice flow.
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great poem.
if u only knew how much i can relate to this poem u would know how much more meaning the two words,"great poem" had.
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