I remember how we met
Ariel had introduced us
I dont think I'll ever forget
It started with some problems
but when I heard your voice
I soon had forgot about them
We would talk on the phone all night
not caring if we'd get in trouble
those nights kept me alive
You were there for me
through good and bad
and you made me believe
I remember when we used to laugh
about anything and everything
now I wish those nights could last
It started with a smile
you made me fall in love
even though I'm still scared once in a while
You showed me was happiness was
I can't really describe this feeling
but it is called love
I remember when you first said "I love you"
I was so scared, I didn't know what to say
then I whispered "I love you too"
Through all the hard times in my life
you've always been there
Those nights with you kept me alive
I remember when we first met
Ariel introduced us
I don't think I'll ever forget
Author notes
This is a happii poem about Brad. hehehe
Comments
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Awww, this is beauitful :] I love reading things like this;; it always makes me smile =)
"I remember when we used to laugh
about anything and everything
now I wish those nights could last"
Favoritest lines everrr♥ Especially that last one. So true. Time goes by too fast =( I also lalaloved the whole kind of repetition of the beginning at the end, but with the words switched around a little. Incredible poem doll ♥
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Very good.
This is great – really.
Replace the name, and you've got my life story as well.
Great grammar and punctuation.
All around, good work.
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