Her lips are painted red
like a china doll harlot
her makeup stains my shirt
eyeliner on my chest
lipstick on my collar
what a shame
i love a whore
A contest entry
- "Your epitaph is already half written, decide how it ends." - Quote Inspired by apoeticinjustice.
850 points, ended July 23, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I'm not sure how this relates to the contest prompt, but besides that I like this piece, the bluntness of the last two lines is good.
Rory
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But sir,
I am anything but.
However, for you I am that and so much more.
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