To help you grow into the man you want to be
Is something I would LOVE to do.
To help you find your true life’s calling
Is something I would LOVE to do.
My children I want to show you
How much I LOVE you.
My sweetheart, I LOVE you.
Not just in words but in the actions
I hope you see everyday
I LOVE the way we LOVE together.
LOVE me, as I know only you can
And our days ahead will be filled
With the way we LOVE each other.
A contest entry
- Love Is A Verb by SerenityNChains.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A very sweet write, and apparently full of LOVE. Thank you for entering and best of luck.
Serenity
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Show me who this is written for and I'll show you a very lucky man. I think 'action' is the key word here. A dreamer can write and talk about it but a doer will demostrate love. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.
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Its all you need lassie,
how come there is never enough?
You bring your heart to this piece,
.not just in words but in the actions I hope you see everyday...
You are giving your beautiful life to love...every aspect of it.
Well placed words make this not only a love poem,
but a proclamation of wholeness and undying loyalty.
This made me feel,
so it is Art to me.
the recipient should be in heaven.
you are so kind and sweet i must give you a gift from me to you......
If my heart could do my thinking,
and my head begin to feel,
then I'd look upon the world and you,
and know whats truly real.
Exquisite!
LOWELL POE
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Love can help us do many things and having no love can be devastating as Rene Spitz proved with babies. Love is powerful, not lust or words without proper actions.
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