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emotions

when you hold me in your arms,
i feel the blood rushing through my body
when you kiss me,
i hear my heart beat faster and faster
when you say you love me,
i feel the tears fill my eyes
when i see you by my side,
i get butterflys in my stomach
when you hold my hand,
i feel happy that our hands are intertwined
when you hold me tight while i sleep,
i am the most comfortable i can be
when you tell me i am beautiful,
i feel your right
when i dream of this,
i dream of you
when i feel you looking at me,
i start to smile
when i think of love,
i think of you and me

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i wrote this for my first real love who broke my heart

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  • Sin with a grin
    November 25, 2008
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    this poem is vey good and tells that u have someone special in ur life