I feel it in my heart
shifting changing
fading growing
ascending descending
i feel a tickle
and my mood ring turns
purple
that's a sign of
what i've got
it's love
flying
floating
soaring
higher
when will it take a rest
never
it has never stopped
in your presents and
love will go on for ever
but though it burns
far brighter than flame
far warmer then heat
we learn to control it
like our own heart beat
because love i morelovely than the word
A contest entry
- Love Is A Verb by SerenityNChains.
700 points, ended August 4, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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A very soft write describing what love is. Genuine and heartfelt. Thank you so much for entering.
Serenity
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This was beautiful kid! A couple of spelling issues: the last line should be 'is more lovely', and I think in row 19, it should read 'in your presence'. Clean that up, and this one is definitely one for the book. I feel this way about you...
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