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Suicide Note

Take a deep breath,

Breath in, bleed out,

hush your words,

don't scream nor shout,

gasp for air,

as the blood is freed,

it runs from your arm,

down onto your knee,

and into your soul,

just wait and see,

read my wrist,

It says, "Kill Me..."

-Razors like morphine to the wrist of an addict.

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  • XbloodXroseX
    September 8, 2008
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    amazing rhyme scheme xD


  • Fading.Heart
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow I Love this, Your poems are truly amazing I wish I could write like you, Ireally do =] Wel Done


  • peregrin
    August 4, 2008
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    Wow, very well written,
    and such a true statement...
    Great work!!!


  • CinderellaSyndrome
    July 8, 2008
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    beautiful and sad love you sis


  • never in his arms
    July 8, 2008
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    ...but she seemed happy

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