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Dear Soldier,

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(Photography of Miah James Ebel, Son and USAF Soldier, and Kelly Mae Johnson, Mom, clasping hands the last time he was on leave.)

Dear Soldier,

I'm the mother of a son who has risen to Freedom's call
To fight a war against terror's grip, bringing liberty to all.

I've watched you kneel down in grief before a comrade who has died;
Such loss cannot be measured; raining tears one cannot hide.

I want each one of you to know you will never walk alone;
When tears fell upon fresh graves, know we've prayed them home.

I've watched you each try to sleep to a bullet-sung lullaby;
Later reading letters from home, encouraging you to try.

I've watched the fear etched in your faces, as each attack would start;
Please know you're not alone; I live in every soldier's heart.

I've watched you take a bullet, and yet you never gave up the fight;
Acting with uncommon valor, facing terror day and night.

In the aftermath, I watched you hand out candy to a child;
As she scampered fast away, I watched you as you smiled.

I've watched you dig up shallow graves; sweet victims of genocide;
While consoling a grief-stricken mother; whose only child had died.

You've dabbed away an old man's tears shed for loved ones buried deep

As he knelt beside graves nearby, I watched you pray their souls to keep.

You've shown mercy on the enemy, only because you care;
Knowing, if given the chance, he'd have buried you then and there.

I know your tears of agony have betrayed your hidden grief;
As intense anger took hold while you fought with no relief.

Until I have walked in your shoes, I can only empathize,
While others choose to point fingers and more so to criticize.

I, myself, can never repay for all you've endured and done,
But I can stand beside you all; yes, every single one.

I will fight the battle here, should terrorists seek to destroy;
My strength shall persevere and all my courage I'll employ.

I've watched you fight for me with intense resolve and courage too.
That only motivates my stance as I fight beside each of you.

I can never repay losses, for those losses are my own;
Yet I want each one of you to know, you never fought alone!

Thank you to everyone who left such touching comments! Soldiers will not only read this poem, but every comment. It's traveling, fast. I know these words of inspiration will have a great impact, and will reach soldiers and loved ones--not just from the U.S.--and will, hopefully, help heal some wounded hearts, because we have let them know we care.-- Kel

(Miah, I'm holding your hand, just like in this picture.  Always know that. Always know that I am near. I love you and I won't let you down. Be waiting for you when you come home. And I know you will come home--Love, Mom)

By Kelly Varner Johnson

Author notes

New comment: Miah is back home now and doing very well. This mama is incredibly relieved. But, I can't stop here. And that's why I'm posting this again. Regardless of whether we believe in the war against terrorism or not, we should absolutely support our troops. If we can't, maybe we should walk a mile in their shoes. Know that I'm praying for everyone who's still in harm's way. Stay strong!   Love to you all!--Kel

Many of our loved ones are still fighting in this war. They miss home. I know this has been out awhile, but they could sure use some encouragement. It's hard on all concerned. This poem has become a very personal part of lives, many lives. Please, don't click and not leave an uplifting message to those who are doing the best they can. We've lost so many lives.

My son served in this war, and I'm proud of him for doing his job to preserve my freedom to write what I want and speak out as I choose, and worship as a Christian. Many of our sons and daughters are over "there," and the best we can do, regardless of how we feel about war, is to support them. These are our children, our parents, our sisters, brothers, aunts, uncles, cousins and more. Let's find some common ground here, at the very least. They need us. Let's be there! Love, light and peace!--Kel
Written January 5th, 2004

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  • julia-99
    November 11, 2008
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    Beautiful

  • tipsbabygirls
    June 5, 2008

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    wow! I love this. I am sobbing- what a relief. I am a soldier's wife, and my soldier too fights at this very moment. God be with them, everyone. Until they ALL come home.--Tipton, MO- US

  • xhtaedwen
    May 22, 2008
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    i loved it


  • GodsRebelChild
    May 22, 2008
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    Thats great you support Our soldiers so generously...


  • Lonely Christina
    May 20, 2008

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    love this! i support our troop and its awsum u do too, no wonder u won a gold! yay
    good job and keep writing
    christina


  • Shancy Fayre
    May 20, 2008

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    I like the way you make the soldiers understand that we stand with them every day. My favorite part is the trust the mom has that she will see her son again. I don't have a part I don't like. Shancy.


  • peridotPixi
    May 20, 2008

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    This poem is amazing, Im an army wife, thank you for supporting our troops and telling us the deitals of some lifes and some losses of being a soilder and thier families, this poem has a wonderful flow along with a wonderful message too, congreatulations to you on the gold, keep up the great writing, keep the strength to continue on each and everyday like so many famlies must while thier soliders are away, mine is at training right now for 40 days and i know his third deployment is just around the cornner, keep it up and thank you once agian, -Amy ♥


    • kvwriter silver member
      May 22, 2008
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      Hi Amy,
      Bless you and your husband. I believe even the families of soldiers are soldiers. I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers. Always know that you have this woman's support. Unfailing!
      Love to you and yours!
      Kelly

  • Bob Fox
    May 20, 2008
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    Kelly

    I must say that you have touched my heart and those out there that can only denounce our troops should hang their heads in shame for all the good that has been doe by our troops they just wish to focus on the few negatives. I think this should be posted all over the world , not only on AP where so many anit- Americans take their easy shots at us, but eveywhere. I pray for the safety of all our soldiers and for their wonderful Moms & dads. God bless my dear friend with great courage


  • vincerollen
    May 20, 2008
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    nice

    amazing.
    good work.
    comment back.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 27, 2008

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    this is so very beautifully written and something i wish every soldier could read. thank you for sharing this with me today. congratulations on the gold trophy. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie

  • lojol
    March 4, 2008
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    great poem.

  • lojol
    March 4, 2008
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    War is so sacrificing and so nesasary somtimes so happy your son made it out alive sacrificing everything. And I think you channeled your emotions into this poem very strongly. To have a true soilder for a son who survived is so special. Though the sacrifice was great im sure he learned so much about life. And the sacrifices for us all will always be remebered.

  • Bob Fox
    February 26, 2008

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    Wonderful

    And i salute you for the heart that you have & the courage you have to write this wonderful piece on AP where it is not very fashionable. Our troops are the best we have to offer. Bravo dear poet.Bravo


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    January 24, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry in our contest, it was a very beautiful and heart felt poem and a tribute to the serving personnel and their families.

    Please consider entering our future contests as we would love to read more of your work.

    Sue and Jeff


    • kvwriter silver member
      January 24, 2008
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      Thank you very much. I've enjoyed the challenge. I will be entering more and appreciate the opportunity. You two make quite a team! Be blessed.--Kel


  • Daydream Fury
    December 2, 2007

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    god bless all the soldiers...their pain we can not know unless we are there with them..everyone here safe from harm is doing so because of them...thank them all for their unselfishness...great piece to them and their families...i'd like to see more tributes like this to all the ones fighting..great jo


  • annoyedfairy
    January 23, 2007

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    Right now tears are streaming down my face. I can hardly even see the computer anymore. That was by far the most beautiful poem that I have ever read. It went straight to my heart. A lot of my friends are in the military and over in Irag right now and everyday I pray with all my might that they come home safe and whole. If anyone in this whole world deserves thanks, its is the soldiers that out their life on the line not stop to keep us safe and free. Without them there really wouldn't be much of a country to live in at all. I pray for all of you everyday and wish all of you success and happiness. Thank you so much. And I Pray that your son and cousins come home safe and sound Thank you for writing such a beutiful inspiring poem. I will most definately be reading your poetry from now on.


  • Ale E
    January 23, 2007

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    Wow

    Amazing...this is a real tribute......amazing.....i have written some soldier poems if you want to take a look........


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 22, 2007

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    God Bless Our Troops

    This was a wonderful tribute not only to Miah but to every soldier in our military. They stand tall and proud among men and women. Thoere is no greater sacrifice one can do for their family and counrty then to defend its freedom. Your poem should be an inspiration to all of them as they read it. Thank you so much for sharing. God Bless You, God Bless our Troops, God Bless America. Take care, Sandy


  • drybones
    January 22, 2007

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    Excellent

    I am a Viet Nam veteran who fully understands the sacrifices our troops must make daily.I'm saddened by the politicalization of this war and the lack of support from many quarters of this country. My son-in-law is currently serving in a combat unit in Bagdad, so I have a personal stake in victory. We didn't achieve it in my war but I pray the sacrifice in lives we've made in this one will not be in vain.Thanks for sharing.


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    January 22, 2007

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    with gold the replacement of a purple heart, you can stand tall and proud, amongst so many hero's that fight for freedom worldwide. so many fear the first footstep on foriegn lands, and dont stop till there feet touch down home, this can never be felt by those who critisize or condemn our soldiers actions , given to them by backroom politicians who don't even know what the enemy looks like face to face. comments of so many variations, will never replace the true feeling you have for your soldier, an extremely well written piece.


  • Stardust100
    January 22, 2007

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    Fantastic

    I've not read a poem like it I want to show everyone spread the word you so lovingly give. You have wrote this so well and deserved that trophy a absoultly brilliant write wow well done.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    January 22, 2007

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    I don't believe any mother could read this without getting misty eyed.I echo the voice of the poet and the poem,I wish to God they had never been sent and wish they would be bought home immediately,but I respect,admire and salute their courage and I only grow weary of those that say it is not possible to support the soldier if you don't support the war for I do.I get my butt kicked when I share my views as I please no one it seems but I can only share what is in my heart and mind and have written several tribute pieces to soldiers in memory of Vietnam,Northern Ireland and Iraq.I have voluntarilly counselled these men and am in no doubt whatsoever of their dreams and nightmares.Long after this war,just like Nam,we will be questioning why they were sent and concentrating on healing body and soul,but they will be embraced with open arms and hearts that sigh thank God they are home.I hope our English troops read this too,God bless them all,each and every one.Love and light,Yvette

  • kvwriter silver member
    January 22, 2007
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    Thank you so much! They are safe! Be blessed Dear Friend. Love ya!--Ke


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    January 22, 2007

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    ..........Oh, and Miah....................God bless you!

    And as your son and cousins might know...this is a ring of fire of appreciation! May the Lord preserve
    you for testimony and joy!


    • kvwriter silver member
      January 22, 2007
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      Yes!!!

      I see your face, for the first time ever. You are so beautiful, Dianne. That smile could melt glaciers! Wow! Love this! You are so beautiful!--Kel


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    January 22, 2007

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    oxygen in reserve for their spirits!

    Oh, girl. I can tell you were overflowing with the content as it pours to our eyes first, and then right to the heart.
    I'm afraid that those who don't know the stand and risk these wonderful country servants are taking on our behalf. Sad, because we are in a different soil, a different pace of living, and our minds and agendas are sometimes shallow. While they're waking up to
    what "MIGHT" happen, we are in our comfy robes wondering why the newspaper's late.

    Fortunately, my husband's a Viet Nam vet, and I know what he came home with.......it wasn't all pretty.
    Good thing is that we are being stretched so that wonders like these are being sent out and we can partake a tiny morsel of this amazing "END TIMES" revelation in the Middle East. ( Ezekiel 38-40!! Oh, my!)

    Thank you, Kelly for your kindness and overwhelming desire to think of someone else besides yourself.

    A literary bookmark for the subject matter!

    Love to you men and women who are there. I SEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

    : Lord hear your prayers!

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 22, 2007

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    oh dear am so sorry to have wasted one of your clicks, I read this yesterday and didn't recognize the title on the feature list. please forgive me.


  • kvwriter silver member
    January 21, 2007
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    Hey, Tom. This site has changed so much and I'm crawling through. Do you have any idea of how I can feature, "Dear Soldier," because it seems to be helping so many--more than we know. I'm just lost! Ahhh! Hope you know what to do. I'm working on it! Love to you always, Dear Friend!--Kel :

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 21, 2007

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    I am in tears, I won't explain what this has done within me, but please know that you have my utmost gratitude for this write. God Bless you dear!
    Suzi


    • kvwriter silver member
      January 22, 2007
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      Hey there,

      Suzi, I'm worried. You haven't responded since reading my "Dear Soldier" poem and telling me you were crying! Goodness! Please, please let me know that you are okay. Please! Love to you and yours! Bless you!--Kel


  • Emmjay
    July 2, 2006
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    History tell us, in most cases, soldiers are innocent victims of management decisions. I will never understand the soldiers plight as I was too young for Vietnam conscription and now too old for middle east conflict. I thank God I was one of the fortunate (so far!).


  • tawk gold member
    July 2, 2006
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    God Bless the Troops. I too also have a son fighting over in Iraq he is in the Marines. I don't support the war but I do support all the troops all over the world they are just doing their jobs.
    I think that everyone should support them no matter what their opinion of the war is. I just want to say thank you again to all the troops here and abroad that serve our country everyday. God Bless Our Troops

  • dancingpuppet
    July 2, 2006
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    allpoetry.com/Poem/2100853
    With so much hate and criticism that our soldiers get, it is about time that they come home and realize how many people actually support how much they have helped and truly blessed our country. It may hurt to send our soldiers away, but it ends up costing them more than it does us in the end. Each of them are gifts to us as a nation and i believe that it is about time that each of them realize this. This poem was great and gave many examples of how much emotion, pain, and work it requires for each of our soldiers to do what they do as a job for us each and every day. To all the soldiers: God bless and take care, you have many people who love you and are counting on you to help all of us! Be safe.


  • Ajsparents
    July 2, 2006
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    very great piece of work,..we are all praying for our loved ones and friends that on whom now for our freedom, we do depend,,and for them to come home safe and soon, and for this war to end, so joyful memories can be made from home...where they belong...


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 2, 2006
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    WOW this poem really blew me away, too. I know a soldier in the army. We were pretty close. This seems to have a lot of emotion and a good use of words, too. Best wishes in writing!


  • vivela silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    What a wonderful thing you have done. Especially to make it possible for the troops to hear what we have to say. I say to them I love you all and pray for your safety. You are doing a noble job!! Warm Regards...vivela

  • dont-4-get- duckie
    July 2, 2006
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    it really blew me away...! i have an older friend who is now visiting (only 2 weeks) and i have many friends in high school who have enrolled in the National Guard... every day that passes is a day closer to them leaving, but for every one of thoes days is a day closer to thoes already there to come home. ( wonderful job )


  • neoladyem
    July 2, 2006
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    I feel all things are true. You have written a smiple, but amazing poem for the troops. I would know, my Uncle John is in the army. So I'm really gald you wrote this poem for him and all the other troops in the world. You have done a fablous jog. God Bless The U.S.A!


  • neoladyem
    July 2, 2006
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    I feel all things are true. You have written a smiple, but amazing poem for the troops. I would know, my Uncle John is in the army. So I'm really gald you wrote this poem for him and all the other troops in the world. You have done a fablous jog. God Bless The U.S.A!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 2, 2006
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    Thank you for sharing this again. The first time I read it, it blew me away. It still does. I am so pleased that it is going out for our troops to read. I am also so glad that it is being shared and posted in other mediums as well. Thanks again to all who serve us and protect us. You all are always in our thoughts and prayers. God Bless all of you. Jeannie D Hunter.


  • shastadaisey123
    July 2, 2006
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    war is enevitable ...battles fought since the beginning of time...do we ever actually win? your tribute is powerful and so true, as a young militry wife, I endured so much fear and agony during the Vietnam war...for weeks, we would not hear a word from our husbands and to try and find answers through the military was impossible, it was all top secret..I will never forget the relief I felt the day he returned home from his thrid tour of duty...indescribable..I applaud you and thank God your daughter is home safe freda


    • kvwriter silver member
      January 22, 2007
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      Wow!

      Freda, I had no idea, and we've been in touch here and again. I want you to know that I hear you and understand every word you're saying. Not knowing is so incredibly hard. And, bless your husband! He came home to a horrible situation. That's the very reason I wrote, "Dear Soldier." I never want our freedom fighters to ever come back to something like that again, no matter how we feel about the war and all the political inuenda. Your husband and my son are just two of the many soldiers who fought for what they believed in--did what they were told to do. And, I can never thank them enough!--Kel


  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    When we wake at night
    in the evenings twilight,
    we've often thought of home,
    ...so far.. have we roamed.

    When our thoughts hold our family near,
    in our hearts we can hear,
    their sweet voices and happy songs
    which we have made our own.

    Each night we face another,
    each time...that we know fear,
    each second filled with danger
    always our home is near.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    How I miss my mothers cooking.
    How I miss my sisters tease,
    and those goggle eyes of my bro,
    he is growing higher then my knees.

    I miss the homemade meals,
    my bedroom and hot-wheels,
    and angel food cake
    that Mom used to make.

    I know life goes on there,
    and that between work and sleep,
    you forget what we are doing
    week after week.

    But, then my heart fills with pride
    as I remember the uniform that I wear
    and I feel such honest surprise,
    to read your appreciative mail.

    ~~~~~~~

    We all want to go home...
    but, there is a "strength" in us
    because we keep our familes near,
    as we fight..determined to persevere.


    I know what your going through as I have been there myself. I remember those moments clearly and they haunt my thoughts occasionally. Remember, your strength is his strength. Your determination is his support. Your faith is his guardian and his future is at home.





  • changeisconstant
    July 2, 2006
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    thank you so much for writing this. i don't at all agree with this war but i DO support our troops...without them who know what would have happened. tell your son thank you (as well as all of your other family members in the war) and best of luck to you, your son (& his fiance), and the rest of you family.

    ♥♥


  • kvwriter silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    Thank you so much, Sarah! I wrote the poem. I'm the mother of the son sent to war. This poem has been read by so many, but I know others need to know that we stand behind them all the way! Thank you for your comment and may God bless you in many ways!--Kel

  • Cryingintherain
    July 2, 2006
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    this is just TOO amazing! So true for so many americans! The Beauty and simplicity of this poem is powerful and moving. I am glad to hear that the ones this was writen for will get the honor to read this and know that their country is standing tall beside them and supporting them in every way we can! I applaude the one who wrote this. i can tell there is a personal connection and i know it takes great streangth to write something this powerful! Have a nice day and God Bless!
    Sarah


  • Comfortablynumb420
    July 2, 2006
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    Wow, this is what i like to see, a poem that isn't just written to express someones ideas and feelings, but is actually intended on helping out others...if our soilders really are going to read this i hope that every single one of them understands that even though we may not know exactly what they've been enduring, we're there for them even if all we can do is write a simple poem. To us a poem is our soul, so i hope they take this as that...a little piece of our heart.

  • Pome
    July 2, 2006
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    Very lovely tribute to all of our troops... Hope and Love are powerful forces for good. Thanks for sharing.


  • SurelyWritten
    July 2, 2006
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    I doubt that I can describe to you to the fullest extent, how grateful I am to you for writing this, I have loved ones fighting in Iraq right now, and other friends deployed all over the world, In fact my boyfriend is leaving for basic training in just three short days, I tell you all of this, because it would be otherwise impossible for me to tell you, I am completely sincere in my gratitude, both to you for writing this, and to those you wrote this for. I will be posting it on my xanga site in order to rally support for all my friends and to let my friends and family know, how far I am willing to go to support them, I would also like to print it out to send to my boyfriend, while he is in BT, with your permission of course, Thankyou so much my dear friend, for writing this, I am forever grateful, If you ever need more points to have it featured let me know, and I will gladly donate them to you!
    God Bless, and my Prayers are continuously directed the soldiers way!
    ~Shirley

  • mmook
    July 2, 2006
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    I cannot begin to express my thanks for what you are doing to preserve our freedom and that of the oppressed in Iraq Thanks guys! Thanks for the sacrifice you give every day! I pray for you often, for your safety and victory. You are the real superheroes. To our military: Thank you for your dedication and protection, you are in our thoughts and prayers on a daily basis and we cannot begin to express our thanks and admiration for what you do for our country and our freedom. May God bless each and every one of you and keep you in His care. Come home safe... With all my respect, to any soldier reading this, I would like to say thank you, but I don't know how. I'm not going to pretend that I know any of you. I do not know the lives you lead. I cannot feel what you are going through, and I cannot begin to understand what you gave up to join the military. But I want to say thank you. I want to thank you for the changes in your lives that us common civilians just can't understand. I want to say thank you for the sacrifices. Thank you for the commitment. There isn't a thank you strong enough that can be given to you for what you are doing. It may feel at times that people do not understand what you are going through, and many won't. It is your experience. But thank you for making it yours. Thank you for protecting us.
    To All Troops! I am Proud of you!!! Because of you, past & present soldiers, I am Free!!! And my Children are free!!! You fight for God & Country!!! To ensure the freedom of all. Whether they are white, black, green, blue, yellow & so on. I… Because of Veterans like you, I am here! They saved my grandparents and parents. You fight to promote peace within, you fight to keep all others and us free!!! Everyone should have the right to speak their minds, vote, get an education, & freedom of religion!!! People should not be penalized for such beliefs or acts!!! So to all of you, I Salute you!!! I salute those who gave & give their lives for all freedom!!! Past Present & Future!!! Thank You!!!
    My dear friends, There are many, many people who I know (including me and my extended family) who are humbled by your devotion to America and the greater world. The work you are doing is absolutely essential in a world of muddled thinking about evil. For it is your sacrifice that is bringing freedom to millions and helping protect our wonderful homeland. I pray that you continue to stand tall and to remember that you are fighting for the freedom of billions of people. Without you, fear and tyranny will reign. There have always been those who are confused or frightened by difficult times. It is the heroes of America who have ignored the muddled thinking of appeasers and relativists to confront evil. Thank you. We love you. Your example makes us proud to be called an American.

    On personal note:


    Especially dedicated: Sgt First Class Wayne M. Ebenreiter love you Joe Mary Wayne Mook



    GO ARMY GO AIRBORNE GO CUBBIE’S…"I pledge allegiance to the flag and my heart to the men who protect it"


  • sweetcountry
    July 2, 2006
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    there are so many of my family members who have gone or are in iraq and i know how you feel we feel loss but know that they are doing their jobs this poem made tears fall from my eyes thank you so much for writing this SUPPORT OUR TROUPS!!!! my great uncle got a purple heart in WW2 and is still supporting what our troups are doing he has explained the calling he received

    great write...
    Laura


  • Cherokee
    July 2, 2006
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    This is beautiful. I'm so happy that he is doing well and I wish you both the best! Yes, many of us do support our troops...our heroes, regardless of our feelings about war.

  • childlike faith
    July 2, 2006
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    What can I say that you haven't already said, and very well I must add. Wonderful,beautiful, heartfelt, are just a few words that describe the way I feel about this poem. Thanks so much for sharing and allowing others to share with people they know. I saw in our newspaper the picture of a young man with a big smile on his face in the obituary column, killed in Iraq. Looked so incredibly young and my heart just broke as I thought of the loss his Mama and family must be feeling. I also have two teen grandsons and couldn't help think what if some day that might be them. God bless all our men and women, watch over them and bring them home soon. childlike faith P.S. Also God bless you for caring so much and I wish for your son and the lady he is marrying all the very best.


  • jewel4Him
    July 2, 2006
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    i can't write long im about to cry gr8 job on this poem may God bless our troops and bring them safely home
    ♥ ,
    jewel


  • musiclover08
    July 2, 2006
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    I can't even think of a verdict! Incred-beaut

    This poem was great. This is exactly how we should feel, how most people can be so heartless and cruel is beyond me. We have many people willing to stand up for our freedoms and to protect this country. Not only does this poem totally support our troops but gives courage to everyone. I know that we would be nothing without you. And in the words of this poem, you are not alone. Thank you for such an amazing write. It is inspirational to many to know that we, here at home, support and will continue to support the men and women fighting. There is only so much one can say about such a beatuiful and incredible poem. Thank you and God Bless!

    ~Music Lover

  • June-bug
    July 2, 2006
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    I don't think there is anything left to say, I believe you have said it all, This leaves me speachless, All the soldiers and civilians around the world are in my prayers. God bless.


  • Ladybug
    July 2, 2006
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    I hope the troops are able to recieve this on July 4th weekend for the freedom they bestow on us Americans. Even though I don't believe in the dumb war they are fighting I am so thankful they are there fighting for my rights to keep my dignity and freedom here at home and that I owe them a great respect for the dirty deeds they do each day.
    thank you Kelly for all you said for the victims of this war and the parents left behind with only a graveside to visit.
    I hope and pray each soldier will return home safe and soon.

    Tamara


  • mitimse
    July 2, 2006
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    congratulations well deservered

    a beautiful message of appreciation that I wish you could directly with our troops


  • gullionmar
    July 2, 2006
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    kel what an awsome poem for tribute of our fine troops all over the world.this is very lovingly written.i am a mother and i love my children dearly, but if not for god and wonderful young men and women they would not have the privledge of living in the land of the free. i am just another poet, but i to write things to honor our troops,if you choose trhats fine. MY POEMS ARE 1 GOD BLESS OUR VETERANS 2 BEFORE WAR,3 SOLDIERS,4DEAR MR. SOLDIER 5 I SEE OUR SOLDIERS 6 INDEPENCE DAY PLEASE TO PASS THEM ALONG TO INSPIRE OUR TROOPS AND BOOST THEIR MORAL FOR WE ALL HERE AT HOME LOVE THEM VERY MUCH.GOD BLESS YOUFOR SUCH A LOVELY POEM AND I'M SON GLAD YOUR SON IS HOME PLEASE TELL HIM CONGRATS ON HIS MARRIAGE AS WELL THANK YOU VERY MUCH


  • CountryCousin
    July 2, 2006
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    Lovely piece.

    You did very well on this piece and I did a poem last year with this same title, different wording but I think we all should be grateful for the troops no matter where they are.


  • FireyAura
    July 2, 2006
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    Wow, this is so beautiful I loved this a lot. My friends fiance is over in Iraq right now, bu tI could never imagin having a child over there and yet, to think that every soldier is someones brother, son, and father. This is an awesome poem and it relaly fits the mood of the season. Great job and may God protect our troops!
    ~*Chelsea*~


  • MoonlightBeam
    July 2, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem and it made me cry. This poem needs a standing ovation, it deserves it. *gives it a standing ovation* a great poem that a lot of people will take to heart. I will sure take it to heart. A beautiful poem. WOW!!!

    Fairy*


  • Princess Muse silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem and does bring tears to the eyes...I was relieved to read your author comments and know your son is safe...You are right...whether you believe in the war or not...We need to support our troups and their families...There are so many people who walk out of our lives to help us stay safe and we never see them again...Too often they leave and feel they are forgotten...They aren't...They are always in our hearts and prayers...Thank you for such a beautiful write...I hope it touches the hearts of many.


  • Foxydaze14
    July 2, 2006
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    Wow! Great piece. I really love this, it's so beautiful. Wonderfully written out. The picture goes so great with the poem


  • kvwriter silver member
    July 2, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your response. My prayers and heart will be with you and your mom. I certainly will check out your poem. Just know that all will be well. I'm believing that! Stay strong, and give your mom a huge hug!--Kel


  • Aun Ali
    July 2, 2006
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    This poem really made me sob. Man you made me sob. What a description of the despair caused to the family of soldiers who wake up in front of guns so that we civilians can sleep peacefully. God save their lives. May God bless them, protect them, help them, guide them......Amen

  • metalfan031287
    July 2, 2006
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    Mam Im a 19 year old young man whose an infantryman(0311)in the United States Marines. I have not been to Iraq yet,But Im sure my mother will one day ensure the same hardship that you are going through.No words of mine can take away the loneliness and wanting you have to see your son and Im sure the many sleepless nights you have praying for his safety. However Im sure your pride and love for your son will keep you strong .I can only hope that it will be the same for my mother.
    Semper Fi Mam
    lcpl phillips USMCR
    P.s. I wrote my own poem about my military service u can check itout if u like its called "18 in the corps"


  • Tam
    July 2, 2006
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    This is the most IMPORTANT thing I have read at AP. I agree with your sentiments 100%.
    How blessed are we as Americans everyday, yet never stop to think of this?
    The ability to go online to AP is a blessing. The ability to go to bed at night and feel secure is a blessing. AND FREEDOM.
    Freedom is not free.
    I am so grateful to the brave men and women around the world, today and yesterday who fight for my freedom. Who have died so that I may choose to worship/not worship whom/what I choose.
    And a woman in the world today, blessed to be born American should be EXTREMELY grateful.
    I pray for the troops daily. For I wish each Godspeed.
    Blessings! Tammy C. Smith


  • StarEyes
    July 2, 2006
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    I agree with you, i can not say what it feels like to have someone in the armed forces as i don't know anyone that is in at the moment. but this says a lot. I am going to bookmark and send on to my sister, and i know she will send it on as well.


  • catz Moderators member
    April 29, 2006
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    I know I've read this before, Kelly and I'm glad I'm reading it again. I'm so happy for you and your son, knowing that he made it safely home.

    I share your sentiments in this poem, every word. I often read words of disrespect and non-support of our troops, and it always breaks my heart... if only they'd stop and realize, that the fighting is done for them, too. I am willing to bet that not all of those brave soldiers are 'for' the war ... but they do their duty anyway and know in their hearts what it's for. Those of us who live in freedom and don'th ave to worry about a bomb going off in our livingroom, are perhaps spoiled by this freedom.... we can't allow it to be taken from us and our military is doing it's best to insure that we don't have to endure such fear on a daily basis.

    I'm from a military family and I've always held respect and thankfulness for them all.

    It's good that so many soldiers will have the opportunity to read this....thanks to you for that

    This is an excellent piece, Kel, and holds more meaning than I can ever express.

    Much love and big
    Dee

  • Sin Heart Tom
    April 29, 2006
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    beautifully touching, i cannot even begin to imagine. My fiance is enlisted in the Navy, my brother is a Sgt in the Army, his wife is in the airforce, it's scarey to think about that. I have friends that went overseas and came back less than sane. it's a harsh world over there. I think this peice is a good reflection of how all of us feel inside when it comes down to it. I wonder if it is possible to print these on christmas cards and send them overseas for christmas? I wonder if it's possible at all? I think for a lot of soldiers, it will remind them of what they're fighting for. God bless your soul.


  • Lil Langston
    April 29, 2006
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    Thank you so much I have a father who is a veteran of the first Gulf War, he points out every day that people have no sympathy or do not support our guys over there. I felt the same way for the most part as I have other relatives who are serving over there as well as friends. Even though Im not in (yet), as a military brat in a military family, I truly do feel for our guys over there.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 29, 2006
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    Overwhelming!

    Bravo! Well written. And THANK YOU to all of you who have given yourself to serve each of us living in the USA. THANK YOU for your sacrifice, whether it be here or overseas. I salute each of you, and hold you close to my heart!!
    Edited on Apr 29, 5:06 p.m. because ''.


  • Catressa gold member
    April 29, 2006
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    I am so sorry KV I read this a long time ago and loved it then.. I am glad I reread it .. still just as beautiful and touching now.. From the Army Wife, Catressa

  • comet of 1989
    April 29, 2006
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    Absolutely amazing. This piece brings tears to the eyes. I truly thank you for letting us all have access to this piece, well done, I take my hat off to you.
    X tragedy X


  • yellowsub
    April 29, 2006
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    This made me cry. My cousin was fighting in Iraq and was shot in the head. He was in a coma and the doctors had no hope of any sort of recovery at all but he miraculously healed completely. It's wonderful. So I truly support the soldiers, perhaps not the war itself, but the soldiers and I feel for everybody who has lost a loved one or who is waiting for a loved one to come home. This is truly amazing.
    Thank you.
    yellowsub


  • Cupcrazy
    April 29, 2006
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    This is an absolutely beautiful piece, filled with love, and staunch support for those who lay there lives on the line so that everyone else may enjoy freedom from tyrany. Their true bravery is beyond a thank you, it is imprinted upon our hearts and souls! One and all take care and come home safe! Hugs Bunny


  • SocietalBromide
    April 29, 2006
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    I read this poem and I cried. I care so much for the marines and the soldiers. They are brave men and women. Brave men and women who have faith and believe in what they are fighting for. They are there fighting for our country. It hurts me so much to know that they are over there so lonely...so afraid and not knowing if they are going to make it that day or even the next. It scares me cause I love them all. All I want is for them to come home safely. I know they are not my actual relatives, but while that may be, I still consider them a huge part of my life and a very big part of my heart belongs to them and only them. The day they come home- The very day that they come home...... It will be the happiest day of my life... they will be so happy to see their kids,their nieces and their nephews.. their husbands and wives... they aunts and uncles.. and.. oh...

    I support them with all my heart and soul!! I hope they continue to have faith and to believe in themselves. I pray that they be safe and warm at night. That they know just how much not only I- but how much so many others care. Sometimes, all they need is to feel and know that they are in fact appreciated. I was talking to one the other day, yeah. He was so sweet and so happy that I had messaged him and he said that before I talked to him, he was sad and lonely and about ready to cry. Sometimes, they just really need somebody to talk to.

    The soldiers and the marines shall forevermore have my respect. They shall forevermore have my faith and my appreciation. But above all things, They will always have a place in my heart and they will ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS have my love.


    Good job you guys!! Yall will come home soon, I just know it!! Keep yalls heads up and keeping believing in yourselves... I love you all!!!

  • cameronp616
    March 2, 2006
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    I like this, its really deep


  • Unspeakable Tears
    March 2, 2006
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    this is a beautiful poem. it was so touching, i had tears swelling in my eyes. i loved the way you wrote it. Both the poem and picture were amazing. the picture alse touched my heart. this is definatly a poem i will never forget. you did such an amazing job. i am so glad you son is safe and at home. great job.


  • carlspenc1
    March 2, 2006
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    It just get`s better with every read

    Tiz great to know that your son is safe and well ,
    how sad that so many young lives get taken every day ... do you think the troops should come home now and let the UN tidy up the mess we all made over there ?.
    Sadly I believe there will NEVER be peace in Iraq because they are ALL so crazy over there, if they are not trying to kill our troops ... they are all killing each other ? .. it is a very sad state of affairs ... infact it reminds me of our own problems in Northern Ireland ... we shall never have peace there either` because the two fractions hate each other so much.

    This poem is Beautiful and you had a Happy ending too

    I wonder how many " not so lucky " people have taken time to read this Wonderful and uplifting scribe ?.

  • DeadAngel1700
    March 2, 2006
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    Wow....this was intense. I can only imagine what it must be like, watching your son/father/husband going to war.

    This write is amazing, not only the meaning but also the way you wrote it and used metaphors, I loved it.

    I especially liked:

    "I want each one of you to know you never walked alone;
    When tears fell upon fresh graves, know we've prayed them home.

    I've watched you try to sleep to a bullet-sung lullaby;
    Later reading letters from home, encouraging you to try."

    those lines were very powerful....great write I hope things turn out okay.


  • Glenda L Hand
    March 2, 2006
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    Excellent!!

    Great! Thanks so much. I so apprecaite those who serve. My son in law was in Irag, my unborn grandbaby's daddy is in Korea, and my friend's husband is preparing for Irag. God bless bring them and all the soldiers home safe.


  • Scotlass
    March 2, 2006
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    BRAVO!!! I am wiping away a tear as I am commenting on this moving and wonderful, heartfelt write. The image alone tore at my heart. You have expressed yourself so eloquently in this write and I am all but speechless... BRAVO!!!!


  • kvwriter silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    Queenie, thank you so much for your response. You absolutely know what is going on here. Really. I would love to meet you one day. In the meantime, than you so very much for your support on this poem, and on my other poems. You don't judge. and I find that so incredibly refreshing. You are a strong woman, and the world needs more of that. God bless you!--Kel

  • kvwriter silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    Thank you so much! You just validated my decision here! Thank you!--Kel


  • queenie
    March 2, 2006
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    as i read the first line,it came back to me.this is a piece that you just don't forget.sorry to wastr your points but i hadn't read you in a while so i wanted to catch up.this will always be one of the best pieces i have ever read.

  • Pleiades
    March 2, 2006
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    this is an excellent poem, with a very well subject,well written.
    well done.the subject i really liked it a lot and it had a great influnce on me.You really worked on it very well.good job
    Edited on Mar 02, 12:40 because ''.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    Sentiments very well expressed in these lines - great job and good that you are recycling this wonderful poem.


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    March 2, 2006
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    AWESOME JOB!!!!! ENJOYED IT!!!!!

    As a reitred military spouse (23years) I know how you feel. I also have a son-in-law in Korea, and he is getting ready to deploy soon, I am praying he doesn't have to..... i am glad you son is back home safe and sound, may god bless all of our servicemembers here and abroad, guide them and bring them home safe. AngelicMistress


  • hoodoolover silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    Amazing

    Amazing piece, I am very glad to hear you are all reunited now and safe, thanks for this write!


  • kvwriter silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    Miah is back and safe. But so many others are not. We just have to keep going . . .--Kel

  • BabyHizzy69
    November 21, 2004
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    AWESOME

    THIS IS AN AWESOME WRITE!! My father was in the military so i know what its like to have them have to just up and leave and be gone for really long periods of time i never really understood as a child but i definitly do now. I pray for the soldiers fighting terrisom in Iraq and their families every night. This was an awesome poem it brought tears to my eyes and made me think of my father and how much i miss him THANX!!
    ~*Crissy*~


  • kvwriter silver member
    November 14, 2004
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    Thank you to all who commented and left heartfelt messages to all the soldiers out there, trying so hard to do what they believe is right. They're fighting for us all and it's touching how so many people, regardless of how they feel about this war, can support our troops. That's beautiful! All of you are beautiful. And, your words are being read all over the world. Sometimes, we never know how we might affect another person, or other people, but if we offer positive, then that's how others will receive, and that one word said at just the right time might make all the difference in the world. Love, Hope and Peace.--Kel


  • acryforhelp
    November 13, 2004
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    WOW this poem was so heartfelt..and so touching..it was just really beautiful..I loved the way that you showed how much you really cared about everyone fighting for us..I pray day and night for the people fighting to be safe and make it home alive..Great write
    Keep it coming from the heart..
    Haleigh

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