Dark visions haunt her every moment
castle that imprisoned her
Youth hidden in concrete tomb
outside now free from harm
Never free from her dreams
despair drawing her back
To face her demons
so she may be forever free
A contest entry
- Tell me what YOU see by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended July 9, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow! your words match the picture so very well...the loneliness flows like tears and leaves this reader wanting to read again
thank you my loyal pet for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you mistress
your words are so kind
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You did a wonderful job brother!!! I really loved the emotion in this.. You really expressed a lot here and brought out a lot of emotion from this picture..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you so much baby sister this piece brought out some feelings from down deep
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Ahh to be forever free!! Can definitely feel this in the picture!
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Thank you
Thank you ,I think we would all like to be free from something in our lives
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fight those demons........!
this is very interesting... thanks for sharing this and entering in contest..... good luck.......! -
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words SL
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