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Tied Up

tie me here
leave me to die
let owls swoop down
to pick at my eyes

beaten and starved
and wrist bond up tight
let day never start
let me be one with night

let the wolves come
to tear off my skin
and let the maggots live
were I once may have been

Author notes

kinda dark, sorry

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  • urapns66
    July 31, 2008
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    Awesome loved the last stanz! great job =D


  • Fulabeans
    July 8, 2008

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    It is rather dark and it flowed well for the most part. I like your style and I love the last stanza. very well done

    -Dustin-


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 8, 2008

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    I actually laughed at this poem, don't ask why. But I love dark, and this was just brilliant. To me funny.. I am just that weird. I loved this. Thanks for entering! Keep on writing, until you can't no more!!

    xXDCXx

    ~Make Peace, Not War~


    • Cat10
      July 9, 2008
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      kinda scares that you find this funny...but eh..at least I got an emontion outa it thanks for the comment

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