I’m the edifice of etiquette
the sultanic predicate
mysterious mind bender
I’m Moluv the presenter
I’m ready meet the deadline
My truck has a bed line
So I can fill it up with these
Thoughts from my mind
I’m fun and energetic
So expect the unexpected
I’m a quick understudy
My styles are eclectic
i cut leather with a butter knife
ain’t that a sight?
I believe there is more than one life
Am I right?
I was dumbfounded
As my heart pounded
The troops circled my hideout
They had me surrounded
They thought for sure had me
But they messed up badly
There’s an underground railroad
From my house to daddy’s
He lives up north; there he’s sort of free
There are no laws but there are still places he shouldn’t be
He might get killed but it’s not because of his color
It‘s because he was at the wrong place,
At the wrong time,
With his own brother
My brain was absent from this abstract work of art
Please forgive me if this makes no sense from the start
The mysterious mind bender is at it again
Unlocking my box and letting his mystery in
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lol...now THIS was all right. Hmmm, Mo laying it down after the family vacation, huh? lol...adding another to our nation. Very nice 'inside' education here. I loved this flow, son. "The mysterious mind bender"? I like it...lol.


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:) lol...well, I like it. Love, Lane


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thank you for your comments. i was in a weird place with this one. thanks again.
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Pandora's box unleashed! Filled with the wonders and hatred of life! Be careful for what you ask for, in the oracle of life! ~Sie

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thank you for your comments and putting up with my crazy thoughts. thanks again.
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This was really interesting, quite the curious piece but I really enjoyed reading, another work of art, as always you write so well and with passion.
I had to highlight the red writing I have trouble reading it it hurts the eyes but not to worry lol
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Well done my beautiful friend.

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Thank you for your interest in this piece. i get weird thoughts every now and then. thanks again.
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l.o.l.
the mind bender is on the loose! watch out people he could be dangerous for the mind, he don't sound too kind, but he might be the one to keep u in line! l.o.l. nice boy!

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thank you for entertaining my crazy thoughts bro. I really appreciate the feedback.
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