The heavy door I tackle
which leads to untold lands
escapes my plight of entry
and leaves my knocks in bands.
What's on the other side?
My mind asks a dozen times.
For fear or glee; I ponder...
and hope at least it rhymes.
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired Contest: Doorway of Dreams by shepherd23.
450 points, ended July 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel Free...
Comments
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a good piece, light hearted, i thought, especially with the ending of your poem, that made me smile with the i hope it rhymes.
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Take my advice Ian hahha never write when you're tired, sleepy or ________...in my case hahaha I never take this advice
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