Looking at your face
I always see you smiling
Like everything is ok
But you're dying inside
I could take a bullet for you
Instead you put a bullet on my heart
Saving you from death
And giving you another chance
All i wanted is to be next to you
but now you're next my dead body
with tears rounding down your face
Like shooting stars falling of the sky
Now i've realized
that i gave my life for you,
a girl who doesn't noticed me
or even known that i existed
But with a little piece of faith
i was hoping that one day
you'll cry for my death
and then i'll see you cared about me
Comments
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omg! im crying now lol i hope u never die, i've grown to close to you, i'd jump in front a bullet for u, if i took 2 in the back im sure i can take another in my heart so u can fix it again


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omgosh!
this was intense! the emotions here were so raw and powerful, i'm all teared up now!
a very touching write, and your last stanza was strong yet filled with sorrow! keep penning, and keep the faith alive!
~AWESOME~



