I feel it,
this burning-
growing within my body,
spreading heat like a furnace.
It's painful, these parching flame,
I seek relief but it just won't go away,
Oh...it hurts, yes...sweet baby this hurts.
Honey, baby love, I'm whithering away.
Shriveling from this internal fire.
Give me your fire extinguisher,
give it to me baby, please.
This fire must leave,
Save me, love,
S'il vous
plait
...
..
.
Comments
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Whoa! I can feel it! It does look lovely on the page too.
A great capturing of intense emotion.

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Hot diggity!
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Quite tantalizing, indeed and it looks lovely on the page, too.


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estupendo!!!!!!!!






