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V i r g i n

Vulnerable
Innocent
Rare
Genuine
Impugned
Natural

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Written January 5th, 2004

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  • Desire gold member
    January 6, 2004
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    Another awesome piece sweetie~YOU are so darn good at acrostics~I love to read them ~Keep them a coming my dear~Big hugs and much love~Desire

  • Jhirrad
    January 6, 2004
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    That's really good. I think it's sad how many in society give in to the pressures of having sex early in life and how they ruin the possibility of something with someone that they love being so beautiful, that you are still all of those things after being with them. Really wonderful and inspiring.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    January 6, 2004
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    Rare indeed, but not strange. To have sex just to say 'I did' means absolutely nothing! I have waited long, and never felt sorry about. Still remember with good feelings in my heart about the first time, because it wasvery especial and not only an act.
    Short and very nice write!
    Mari

  • Hugh Jorgan
    January 5, 2004
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    im going to look at this from what i wish i coulda been instead of the boy that wasted his innocence (though just the intimate part bah! innocence was wasted period long ago eh hmmm i ramble forget what i say) rare they are any one that stays a virgin... i give kudos too


  • erin ravenskye
    January 5, 2004
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    Impugned? is that the I word you were looking for?? Hahaha, see, if I had a DICTIONARY, I'd know what that word meant! to you for being so smart.

    ~ Erin Ravenskye

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