V.1:
It's been 7 months since you died
And I never got to say goodbye
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
V.2:
It's been 5 months since you died
And I never got to say goodbye
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
pre-chorus:
I know you may be watching over me
I just want to say thanks for the memories
CHORUS:
Car crash, big pole, and now you're gone
Car brakes, big mistake, it's hard to move on
Miss you, miss you, please come back home
A story of an accidental car crash
V.3:
It's been awhile since I've seen your face
All the memories I can't erase
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
pre-chorus:
I know you may be watching over me
I just want to say thanks for the memories
CHORUS
V.4:
Your birthday happens to be today
I wish I could say it in everyway
But I can't today
Because you've gone away
Ending:
It's been 8 months since you died
And I never got to say goodbye
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
It's been 6 months since you died
And I never got to say goodbye
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
Author notes
this song is about my friend mitch who died, it's been 8 months to this day, his b-day was yesterday. it's also about my cousin tegan who died, it's been exactly 6 months to this day. it's called R.I.P. it's temporary until i get a better title.
A contest entry
- Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 194 entries
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What do you think?
Comments
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this was so sad. I'm sorry for your losses, and I hope your coping well. this was a great song and I loved the chorus. however verse 4 seemed kind of awkward to me. I loved the ending and how it was a bit of a time period.
thanks for entering and goodluck
and please put your ap name in your authors notes. -
It's been awhile since I've seen your face
All the memories I can't erase
I just want to say that I miss you
And that I'll never forget you
this is so sad.
I'm sorry for your loss,
and I think that this will make an amazing song. -
ap name in authors notes please. and I'll comment for real later.
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