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Sex and the Species




The monk parakeets do so much chattering
by the park at 5:30 near evening.

Sue appears to have lost her favorite feather,
apparently; seems she's blaming Heather

Who really wants to nest with Joe
yet he won't give it a go 'cause

He's awfully partial to the
saucy squawks of Dorothy.


And get this --- Percy Parakeet feels that
beneath his exterior, he's actually a fish.

Wants desperately to have his wings 'corrected'
into fins, but the venture's very expensive.


Must tune in tomorrow;
same time, same location.


Author notes

The above is what I think the birdies said although tis possible that humans comprehend the parakeet language quite horribly;
like pigeon Portuguese.

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  • LonelyAngel
    October 3

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    Vry well written. This was a witty and quick poem, with very funny storylines. At first I did not quite understand, however,have the AN at the bottom just made me laugh.

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  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    October 30, 2008
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    lol

    This was funny. Awesome write..Good luck in my contest and thanks for entering.

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  • BlackSwan
    July 24, 2008
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    good luck


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 15, 2008
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    Wow, you flung it with humor bindings; thanks for your entry and good luck lol


  • CowboyFan1
    July 12, 2008
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    thanks for the entry


  • michichoeret
    July 9, 2008
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    absolutely wonderful


  • Alasar Minoko
    July 8, 2008
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    lol sounds like real life hm...


  • rollingzen
    July 8, 2008
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    well done

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