T all wheels of ash, steel rimmed and narrow, come to rest.
T he burden is light in the two meter wagon made in the style of a land far away.
A draw bar with T handle, parallel to winter’s blanket, points toward a ‘saltbox’ house
A bandoned for the moment by the hands that pulled it there, it waits at ready.
N arrow corner posts projected upward, the lashings loosened a minute or two ago.
N ow crisp air thickened expelled breath, slightly obscuring them from view
N earby, a wire fence traces a course along the field’s edge to open gateway.
N othing has passed recently but two pair of boots and a set of wheels.
E vening’s approach has cast the sky a deeper steel blue between grey wisps.
E ach day’s light between now and first hay will be slightly longer.
N ew smoke rises from the chimney of a two story ‘saltbox’ house across the gate.
N ightly lighting of lamps cheers the windows set back in stone and mortar.
B efore long, the forest some furlongs away will drift into dream and shadow.
B edtime for the little ones has come with dreams of candy and new clothes.
A nother night will not pass before the cargo is carried in through the summer kitchen.
A ngels of corn husk and ribbon will soon rest amid candle and bow.
U pstairs, small faces pressed to glass peer out toward the field with anticipation.
U ncles and aunts will bring bundles of children and packages two days from now.
M eanwhile, the wagon will wait for tomorrow’s sun to glitter the ground.
“M ight as well head in and enjoy Mama’s cooking” said Papa,
“ She will love this grand fir tree you have chosen”
Author notes
Sitting in the family room on a hot July afternoon, looking over a print
entitled . . . ‘Bringing Home The Tree’ by Dan Capanelli
Thoughts on the evening before. The second acrostic represents tradition being carried on in a new land.
A contest entry
- Favorites of Silent Hawk by PureCountry.
875 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love constructive criticism
Comments
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I need to read this again but at first read Stunning


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Christmas In July
what beauty and warmth you paint with just a touch of western flair. You must know my heart, LOL
Niaish for entering and best of luck
Silent Hawk

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One thing I can for surely say is that you paint quite a picture. Nice job!
Bautiful words, fabulous write!!




