The sun rises solely so she may be warm.
The moon rises solely so she may dance.
The earth exists solely so she may see it.
The universe exists solely so she may discover it.
Her skin is made of flower's softness.
Her hair is made of the sun's shine.
Her clothes are made of nature's beauty.
She is made of the world's wonder.
You'll never see her, but the animals do.
She belongs to them, her petals belong to you.
She is the spirit of the flowers of the world.
And this is the reason that she is named Rose.
A contest entry
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Comments
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this was very beautiful
seemed as though it was written as part of a shrine in a forest
thanyou for the entry -
Aw, this poem was just lovely and I sounded a little lame after I said that.
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I love this. Whether relating to humans or not, it evokes feelings and emotions. Very well done.
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Interesting!
Charming and wonderful. "She belongs to them, her petals belong to you" is enchanting. Thank you for your entry and Best of luck in my contest. -
Hmmm I found all the 'solely' a little bit awkward to be honest, sometimes repetition works but often it doesn't.
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thank you for the entry
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