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2:00 Pm

My eyes are closed,

but my mind is that of

a sensual desire.

As I listen to the rumbles

of waves nearby my suite,

panting while my soul

fills the air with heat.

You are my

Darkness

that fades in and out

of my twilight zone,

raging hormones

take control,

as you enhale my

perfume

all night long.

Indulge me

while I soak

in your thoughts

of naughtiness.

  

Marinade into

my chocolate sachet'

of cream filled puffs

that capture the essence

of your cravings.

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  • Kim
    July 10, 2008

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    A TOUCH OF CLASS TO EROTICA. EXCELLENT WRITE, MY SISTER. I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT A LOT OF PEOPLE FEEL THAT IN ORDER FOR IT TO BE CALLED EROTICA IT HAS TO BE RAUNCHY. WELL, YOU PROVED THEM WRONG. THIS WAS HOT, SASSY AND ABSOLUTELY CLASSY. KEEP IT UP, SIS. GOD BLESS YOU!


    • Ephiphany
      July 11, 2008

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      Thanks sis

      glad you enjoyed this other side it's all good though, I agree, EROTICA doesn't always have to be raunchy. I'm more sensual anyways, but I do let the beast come out sometimes all in fun and the love for writing.

      Take care


  • HoneyFire
    July 9, 2008

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    such a brillant piece
    I love it as all of your work.
    great job sis!
    I feel close to the same

    • Ephiphany
      July 9, 2008
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      Hey sis

      thank you so much. I have my famous moments every now and again
      Thanks again, sis.
      I appreciate you always.
      -ephiphany


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 9, 2008

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    This is one brilliant piece of writing. I don't write erotica myself, but this is classy, written with style and grace and such imagery too. Well done Piff. Stupendous work.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Dark Otter
    July 9, 2008

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    This erotica

    is giving a craving for a large chocolate dougnut filled with a sweet cream. I've already got my coffee. Your raising my heat again, woman. I'll be back after a cold shower. Take care, Ephiphany.


    • Ephiphany
      July 9, 2008
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      thanks a lot for this HEATED comment
      enjoy your shower


  • Levesta
    July 9, 2008
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    LOVELY AND PURE YET SO SENSUAL LOVE IT WISH I COULD WRITE THIS WAY LOVELY WRITE SIS

    • Ephiphany
      July 9, 2008
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      Thank you babygurl

      I really appreciate your comment on this.
      Oh honey you set Erotic on fire I be watching all the men running up to read your page

      Thanks again,


  • mzmikki
    July 8, 2008

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    So very sensual...

    You ae te master of sensual love... You are amazing... I love it.... Makes me think naughty thoughts!


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    how did i miss this i loved this a whole lot i think you did a great job with this take care


  • darell
    July 8, 2008

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    A very..

    cozy write filled with the fragrances
    of romance and passion. I could visualize
    lovers nestled together by candlelight as
    they sip wine and watch the crackling of flames
    fluttering by a fireplace. Nice work


  • ennovy silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    This a great feeling and so be it...I love reading you when all is well, so full of emotional contentment. You always amaze me with these very sensaul soft writes....excellent share with us....g'mom


    • Ephiphany
      July 8, 2008
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      Hey Godmothet novy

      it's always a pleasure when you stop by. I miss you and Rain so much. for her too.
      Thanks again

      -Lady


  • HaleyMary
    July 8, 2008

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    Good write, Sis. Cream filled puffs sounds really good. Great way to spend the day and relax. I like the way you always start your writes by making the reader think it's going to be something sensual and then you have the surprise ending with just relaxing and enjoying a day of summer. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • moluv10
    July 8, 2008

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    I love the little escapades you take me on through your words. 2:00 pm sounds like a great time. i think i'm late though..lol Great imagery as usual. Keep on writing dear.


    • Ephiphany
      July 8, 2008
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      Thanks Maurice

      You know me


    • Ephiphany
      July 8, 2008
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      Heyyyyy

      Thanks, I will keep writing it's a Passion that I can't seem to shake
      Appreciate you always, Maurice.


  • onesugar gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    Never mind how I'm feeling...you're feeling DAMN NAUGHTY! Who are you thinking about then sis?

    Wonderful piece that entices the senses

    ~sugarcookie~


    • Ephiphany
      July 8, 2008
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      LOL

      sis, I'm thinking about my Chocolate Creme Filled
      Eclairs

      LOL...

      • onesugar gold member
        July 8, 2008
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        Talking of that sis

        I have got something along those lines that I've been working on. I have been feeling slightly naughty myself.

        I hope you are only thinking about them and not partaking of them?

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