So close at such a time, you wern't anyone else's but mine
I don't know what really happend, you told me to stay safe and went away
Nearly four months and I heard not a word, what got me that in reutrn
One day, you finally come back, you tell me your "story"
I cry and I know that I will never get you back
I tell my true lover a similiar story, not knowing what will happen
I am just so dumb founded, realizing there is nothing I can do, it only makes me
Think, did I ever truely love you?
All the time I wiated, why did youhave to run away
Four months later, you're a different guy,drugs have destroyed you, now I see the disguise
Author notes
6. Goodbye my almost lovers.
I am not used to PIF contests, I was browsing, and I thought I would give it a shot.
For anyone who reads this, bare with me, I haven't been on a steady I don't know, thank writer's block, and as for the inspiration ... Thank long distance, online realationships that go awary. If I didn't do this right, or didn't have the right idea, feel free to delete it. I would hate to feel out of place. Possibly, message me and tell me what I did wrong. I am trying to beat my block.
Thank you,
Magdalena
A contest entry
- ++PIF Prompt Contest++ by PerfectImperfection.
700 points, ended July 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
no questions asked..
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Sometimes you never get to know the person you love even after years spent together. Looking on the brightside is that you can move on and try to put that particular relationship behind you. I know it can be tough especially if the heart was lost in love. I do hope the person has now got control of his life to where the drug problem can be a part of his past. Just keep writing with your heart as you did here.
Ted E
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Great emotion coursing within these lines... As far as an insightful comment goes, I would say the spelling is certainly in need of repair. The flow is off, but knowing the feeling - as I honestly do - I can see how jumbled the heart can create us. Thank you for your entry!
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Love you and hold you in my arms
My dearest angel child I hold you in my heart thru the pain you have been feeling. I hope oneday the pain goes away but know you are in my thoughts. I can feel the pain in your words, knowing how much they have been hurting your soul. Your uncle and i will always be here when you need us. Love always your guardian angel and Aunt, Star xoxoxo
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