You astound me/when your words materialize/Insistant probing my intellectual thighs/caressing concepts deep revines/Seeking great unknown it would seem/Outter realms you push past/Entering my internal gray mass/Tempting fancifull notions with each fluid flowing drop/I feel the primitive climax buliding to the top/Continuously I engorge/The shaft of your knowledgeable sword/I'm carried away to hypnotic lands/Drinking thirstfully from your aspiring hands/Go ahead fill your masterly need/Obedient,I'll proceed.
A contest entry
- Romance... (ladies only!!) by Angelflower.
1500 points, ended July 30, 23 entries
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I'm sorry as I'm on a phone. navigating , and formats are diffcult. Thank you . ( think a man wants to hear he is important, strong, sensual, and needed) hope I've captured this here .
Comments
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This was a really interesting piece!! I'm sure this is what a guy wants
you did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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