You astound me,when your words materialize.
Insistent probing my intellectual thighs,
caressing concepts deep ravines.
Seeking great unknown it would seem.
Outer realms you push past.
Entering my internal gray mass.
Tempting fanciful notions with each fluid flowing drop.
I feel the primitive climax building to the top.
Continuously I engorge,The shaft of your knowledgeable sword.
I'm carried away to hypnotic lands.
Drinking thirstily from your aspiring hands.
Go ahead fill your masterly need.
Obedient,I'll proceed to read...
A contest entry
- Romance... (ladies only!!) by Angelflower.
1500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *for the witty and intelligent* by writebrain.
550 points, ended February 27, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ooh...i like this a lot!
very interesting and clever....and a little steamy!
thanks so much for your entry! -
This was a really interesting piece!! I'm sure this is what a guy wants
you did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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