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Better Without You



I can't believe I'd ever be able,

to hate another human being.

But my heart is hardly stable,

after all it's been seeing.

I fell for you and believed,

that you could become a nice guy.

I never knew I'd be deceived,

but I guess all perverts come to lie.

Never wanted to believe it,

all the stuff my friends had said.

For I really I didn't give a shit,

whether they really wished you dead.

Even when I found the truth out,

I was willing to soothe all your pain.

But I soon realised you I can do without

and I wont go through all that again.

I hate you now and I hope you realise,

there's no more chance of you being kind.

For helping you still would lead to my demise,

I guess it's really true that love is blind.

Just remember we're oppositing enemies,

can't believe I ever thought I could change you.

I've saved many a soul and helped them believe,

but there's not much else for me to do.

I hope one day you'll be clueless,

like all those friends you've misused.

I hope one day the girls you touched,

will tell of your filthy abuse.

I hope one day the guys you've beaten,

will decide to turn on you.

I hope one day you'll be locked up,

the worlds better without you.

Author notes

yup...
well karl decided he has some right to ask me who I'm dating, as I forgot to change my status on bebo...so he thinks 'yeah sure ask who it is'... none of his business anymore after all he's done...besides, he'd just rip the shit anyway.

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  • know one
    August 11, 2008

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    wow,great expression.for the most part the rhyme was great and the rhthem too,great write,thanks for entering!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 9, 2008

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    Excellent poem hun, it can be a hard thing when we feel hate wash over us, especially after feeling nicer things towards that person.
    I am sorry he is being a jerk to you

    Best of luck hun

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 9, 2008

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    lol, i find this very funny, but you know that is just me, keep it flowing my friend and good luck in the contest


  • VanGoghNights
    July 8, 2008
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    Nice

    this is a very intense poem! I enjoyed it.
    Thanks for entering


  • MysticalRayne
    July 8, 2008

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    You go girl ~ vent and let it all out ~ release it all sweetie ~ I loved this piece full of raw emotions ~ best of luck in the contest


  • Kiss the girl--x
    July 8, 2008

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    Tell him to take a nice long walk to a cliff, and fall off it

    This was beautiful in a fuck you kinda way

    loves alwaysss


  • Strify
    July 8, 2008
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    Wow! That was beautiful!

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