Let us take invisible roads,
reach for unknown skies.
Let us follow foreign sight,
of which society denies.
Let us walk without our eyes,
as our hearts guide our way.
Let us listen for unheard sound,
as we walk astray.
Let us take what we have not,
wonder without need.
Let us listen to destiny,
and take adventure’s heed.
Author notes
hope this is okay..
A contest entry
- Let's hear it for adventure by davidwright.
600 points, ended July 19, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any lines your hated.. maybe liked??
Comments
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wow ... in the second to last line at 'listen to' ... you have a wonderful little skip in your rhythm almost a twirl .. this is so charming, and i think you must have done it on purpose because it is the only place like that in the poem and that is why it is so effective ...
i love poetry that is written with this kind of feel and subtle flair ... it often remains unappreciated, and perhaps is done not on purpose, but the writer has written it because they knew it was just exactly what the poem is about ...adventure
three more turtles to you
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thank you so much for the comments!
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Great little piece thanks for being a contestant and happy trails
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