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Never-Ending

Oh the beauty I see, when eyes shall close;
lost within the moments of peaceful bliss.
That I surrender to the sweetest kiss,
fair as the honied dew of morning's rose.


And whispered words upon a gentle breeze,
spellbound, a soul captured by deep yearning.
Sparked  embers, once cold, now glow with burning;
lingered trails upon my soul's calming seas.


I'll inhale, then softly melt into you;
surrender my heart to all that you are.
That on my darkest night, your shining star
is the guidance  of my one hope, renewed.


And beneath the nightime blanket above;
to you I give, my never-ending love.

 

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Written as an English Sonnet (or at least tried to, lol)
Rhyme scheme abba, cddc, effe, gg

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  • Dreamy!

    Oh so very eloquent & romantic! After a full day I'm now ready for a dreamy drifting off into the raptured thoughts of love. From beginning to end a fine flow, timing & rhyme!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 14

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    Lovely write, excellently done, and sweetly said..the rhyme and flow is beautiful...You are penning very nicely Storm! Bravo!


  • Griswold silver member
    July 8

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    Nicely done Sonnet, I like it from start to finish. An excellent entry to my contest, thank you for entering. Scott

  • WOW!!!

    Now this is the stuff of poetry that just sets my heart and ear to crave more.
    Wonderfully created Beautiful & I believe your syllable count is right on.
    (eyes are turning green again)
    My best to you in the contest

    Tang

    • Thank you sweetie. For the comments and the thoughts that allowed me to write it.
      And I think I'd like your eyes, no matter what color they are.

      Storm
  • This is simply beautiful hon. So much love and feeling you have written here. And more than that, devotion. Here is wishing this is your reality and not just a piece from the mind. Best wishes and luck in the contest my sweet sis.

    My love to you
    Vickie

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