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Getting Even



Memories of
dead love tease
like tongues glide
across mouths unable to open,

but I’ve bandit lips

...listen


of scars unreturned, beware,
swallow none of these,
but lick their thighs
instead.











Author notes

She says she only fell in love with me because I kept seducing her and so its my fault she walked away ... oO

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  • Virgoan
    July 31

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    You have solid lines here. I like how you've perfected using the ellipses. Appropriate my friend.

    I love how you settled everything in this piece.

    Thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY


  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 8

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    Wonderful write. Seduction has a way of biting us in the butt, doesn't it?

    Your expressions are well penned

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