I came to a halt
looking sideways,
front and back,
WHERE TO GO?
I took a step back and decided to return,
HALT! Is this the right way?
I looked up,
a cloudless sky,
a starless, moonless, dark, night sky,
I looked down,
white, tiny feet in contrast with the dirt of the ground...
Wherever I look,
I can't see light...
I sat down, feet numb,
[I can't feel anything]
I need to move, I must move,
BUT HOW?
Author notes
today is just one of those times that i don't know where to go, don't know when to move on
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this is somewhat deep for my own opinion, but my heart would jump for joy iif you'll say something about this!!!
Comments
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loved the title, and your visions of looking up and down, reminded of me Wawi Navarroza's photo : As above as so below
ditto with Ms Sandygram, we all have these days. I am experiencing this just right now. Thank you for sharing this.
amazing contemplation.
Anna Lee
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this was very frustrating goin in circles
VWD!
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Very good, i love the picture you give, keep up the good work
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Great Write
I think we all have these days. Thank goodnes they are few and far between. A pleasure to read this morning. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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