with days and nights going by
I just cant think of anything else
You are right in front of me
Yet theres something missing
Where have those eyes gone
That always looked for me
Where have those kisses gone
That touched my lips so gentle
Where are those hugs
That used to hold me so tight
Where are those hands
Thats used to fit perfectly mine
You Are Right In Front Of Me
But Where Is your Love gone Honey?
Author notes
tried to make it simple......
A contest entry
- overnight contest. by iverbthenoun.
300 points, ended July 12, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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a brilliant poem full of powerful emotions god luck in the contest
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very well expressed
!!!! ...and for such great thoughts for feelings, you are by every means a contest finalist!!!!
take crae always and have a great week!!!! 
~pithyAplomB.
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thank you for entering my contest. i like what you offered, honestly i think you could have done better.
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It was very simple yet intense
Love how you capture the emotions and portrayed a love lost...well written and it flows nicely!
You Are Right In Front Of Me
But Where Is your Love gone Honey?...fav lines
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