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Disconnected Fantasies

Passionately his lips fell into my ear, as I lay tranced in silkened linen,
fingers trembled, pulling the coil of his toy, while blind burning surged

legs entangled in sea's seduction asp and writhe under narrated love songs,
call out to my burning flower repeatedly.. rapidly, lifted the sun from darkness

synthetic scents of imagination charioted in a raid, pressed against my cheek,
awakened, my hands clutched, squeezing the hard surface, pushing it into my lips

lost in static, the world was put on hold, as 911 attempted to dampen my fire,
lain labored from impregnated mind, the dam peeked and screamed to burst

nearing the worlds edge, speeding on comets tail into heart of super nova,
faster... rising, pushing... deeper!   ..................... dial tone @A#*!!   disconnected

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt 1. True Love cannot breed over wires.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    July 9, 2008

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    Oooh what a wild ride!!! Damn that dial tone! A very creative piece to go along with the chosen prompt. Poignant and very well penned. Thanks so much for your entry!