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Awakened by Tranquility

Electric circulating
Through deep blue veins,
Though supressed by a box
To which I own no key.

A rainbow of colour
Holds more elegance than
Zounds of floating doves.

Definitively {formless} until
My eyes draw closed,
Then the isolation cube [explodes].
A lavish spill of consciousness
Spills from amongst the sparks.

||Befriending muse please be my faculty||

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  • Tattboyspet
    July 9, 2008
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    Line 10 needs checking


    • MichaelBe
      July 9, 2008
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      Thanks for the heads up There's always one i miss haha