Looking back into the past,
I see misery and pain,
Looking into the future,
I see the same.
Looking back into the past,
I see nothing but dark,
Looking into the future,
I see all my shadows part.
Looking into the past,
I see what I see now,
Looking into the furture,
I see no way out.
A contest entry
- Tell me what YOU see by Lil-Bit Crazy.
600 points, ended July 9, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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there is a way out....... you'll find it someday.... i have faith in you even though im not sure who this is... this is close to home for me too..... so i feel your pain i didnt think id ever get out of my parents alive somehow i did..... love the title and all of this poem this was well written... i like how you made it your own out of a picture that could have went many ways...... thank you for sharing this wonderfully written piece with me.... and for entering .... good luck in this contest......!!!!!!!!!
lil-bit
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