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Sunday's Sundaes

Sacred cow tent fanaticism's piety pastries

glazed with animus icing laced in conscience's toxins.

Teleological hallucinations infuse rapturous gluttony,

inspire vision seeing hell's trolls

lurking in faces and facades of every beating foundation.

 

Icons of rationalized self imminence uses as stilettos

to slay the figment villains of extremism's ice cream headaches.

Sermonized menu of blessings candy store for disciple's palate

always has justification's fudge covered pathogens of avarice reciprocity,

mantra of feigned lament uttered over those sacrificed while dessert was being served.

 

 

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Prompt choice 2: Apologies for dessert.

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  • PerfectImperfection
    July 9, 2008

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    HOW do you do it? You know, this prompt was one I thought you might pick lol. An excellent piece of imagery to verbiage. Very well penned, and truly captivating! Thanks do much for your entry!


  • StarEyes
    July 8, 2008

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    What am I gonna say about this one! This is amazing! Beyond words!! as the comment before mine says! What a read! And what a take on the prompt!

    Best of luck in this contest my brother!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Stardust-luvr
    July 8, 2008

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    wow the imagery expressed is beyond words!!!! I am in awe for you breathe new life to my soul with the wonder of your poetry. thank you, many blessings always xxxx