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Thirteen hours causes a heart to melt.

My body shakes,
I tremble in my broken dolly shoes.
I see you come towards me,
Why is everyone else fading away?
Why has the world stopped turning?
and why most of all...

Did I have to fall inlove with you?

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  • DreamerOfTheStars
    July 16, 2008

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    awwww Emily I love it I felt that once and it was like ten hours though... sorry I haven't been on lately... but I love this so short and simple yet it drives home a majorly heard point...
    Love always~ Steph


  • alexandra.
    July 8, 2008

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    'broken dolly shoes'
    Great imagery there, and I don't doubt for one second that it is nothing but the truth.
    Very open, very honest and a very pure sort of poem.

    loves,