Your tongue is like a razor blade,
it cuts me at my heart,
like the knives that are your fingertips
that just keep slicing me apart.
You rip me open, make your home,
and as soon as I think your through,
your tearing me apart again
without giving me time to become anew.
You push me down and back and forth,
confuse, abuse, and use me.
Play your head games while I suffer,
no second thoughts about what your doing to me.
One step too far, you know it's gone,
but that doesn't seem to matter anymore.
Your on an angry rampage and
you can't see through, it's worse than before.
Your shouting and screaming, pushing and shoving,
I'm on the ground and your kicking at me.
Why wont you stop? What have I done?
Please, I'm bleeding and broken, don't you see?
But your not stopping, there's blood in your eyes,
and your anger is out of control today,
I finally just stop moving under you
and you just walk away.
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I wanted to write a new poem... and this is what came out... idk, what do you think?
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Kaela
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WOW!
Very powerful piece indeed, such a loud out cry of injustice, crimes committed to ones heart. It is hard to select a preferred stanza here, it is all perfectly woven together, no line too many, nor one too less. You have done an awesome job in channeling this pain into an incredible and memorable piece.
This is a subject matter I can unfortunately relate all to well too. This crime of control and abuse has no age group, normally associated to men, but believe me; woman too!
And for those who have to deal with this, all I can advise is "RUN!!!" Get the hell out of there. It will not change, nor will it end well.
In hopes that this is fictional, but... it all bleeds, as real to me...
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Thank you =]
Parts of this I can relate to unfortunately... but it's over now.
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very nice. i like it a lot. the poem, not so much the message and or meaning behind it but it is a very good poem. -
Woah sissy.
This was amazing. I loved the last two lines. It's like that person was only hurting the other for the reaction. Great job.
I love you
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Omg... this is scary!!!!! But its one of the things where it is scary good!!! I loved it!
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