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limits

borders give endless horizons of silent
thought and created images revolving in
colorful pursuit of a controlled destiny
to become

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prompt:


mindfields

A contest entry

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  • phantasyintrigue-x silver member
    July 8
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    Great flow and separation of each line.

    That ending, "to become" is simply stated and so evocative at the same time...it has a lot of depth, like the rest of the poem.

    "colorful pursuit of a controlled destiny"
    My favorite line. =D

    Thanks for entering.

  • maralisa gold member
    July 8

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    borders give endless horizons of silent thought fantastic take on the promt good luck in the contest