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Crash



It was difficult to say
exactly when I was cut loose.

The familiar feeling of floating
became the feeling of falling.

The the realization came that
this feeling ended in a crash.

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A contest entry

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  • PoeticLove
    July 8

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    We all fall many times,

    You don't have to do much for yourself, Amera already did most of it, move on and pay attention to your own advice, you'll be fine. Great poem.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 8
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    Simple and effective, I like it a lot.
    Jeff


  • YoureNoGoodForMe silver member
    July 8

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    Excellent piece. I liked your take on the picture, as it was really different from the ones I've read Thank you for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥


  • Amera gold member
    July 8

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    Well! I'm here to pick you up and dust you off. I'll point you in the right direction and whisper in your ear "It's OK".

    Love,
    Amera♥