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Gardening



The butterfly that sups upon this flower
Has reached the richest nectar ever found
The petals that protect this lady's bower
Are parted by his lips without a sound

His tongue explores the depths that she would hide
To tease such sweet reactions from within
She dreams that all of him would fit inside
It's time for rising passions to begin

The first time that she found her butterfly
He worshipped at this shrine to ancient lusts
Her other lips were parted by a sigh
She died a little death upon his thrusts

Each night her garden soil is finely tilled
While all her fantasies become fulfilled



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Sensual by ~Ottokees

http://ottokees.deviantart.com/art/Sensual-51280554

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  • markgrif gold member
    August 14
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    Great use of metaphor.

    Enjoyed.

    Thank you for entering.


  • Naridill
    July 21

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    I absolutely was stunned by stanza three - especially the last line. This has something more than sensual - the mood is lifted and really adds a pleasant flow.

  • nichtmich silver member
    July 12

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    Soothing sensual words that inspire the finer arts of lovemaking. A read that provokes a sigh of satisfaction. Thank you.
  • WOW. Superbly sensual, sexy, and passionate. Well done. Absolutely wonderful. ~Pamela


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 10

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    Ah yes, Very good. It takes a great unselfish man to make a great lover. Lovely, sensual, sexy. Good luck.

  • well done as always.
    This is tough to beat,
    But shall give it my best

    Love you
    Tory

  • you are a very bad man

    You should be using your considerable command of language and imagery for good and not ... not ... you know ... eeeeeevillllllll.

    This is pure grace. I love your touch. In a manly, professional, poetic way, of course.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 8

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    ....this is gonna be tough competing against you...your sonnet is both sensuous and tastefully written. I would expect nothing less from the one
    with the romantic heart Love, Lane

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