(for Shape Poetry class)
My
mother
advised:
rings come
with strings
and I remember
engagement means
no things such
as flings. I
cannot see
you ever
again.
Bye,
Me
A rictameter is a nine line poem, syllable count 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2; first,last lines the same. Please feel free to comment.
Comments
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Fun Shape Poem - Like a Diamond, but NO!
Very clever.
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I like it!
Form poetry such as this is indeed interesting and fun. The words therein are sad but true; most attachments in life do come with strings attached. Very rarely is love unconditional. Thank you for sharing. -
Very sad and deep words that you
have written in this wonderful form.
Lovely job here and thanks so much
for sharing it with us all! Keep up
the wonderful work here and thanks a lot
for taking the time to read mine. I
truly appreciate it!
Jeremy0826
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