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My Return

Welcome back to the show everybody!
My brain pump pump's like a 12-gauge shotty
The thoughts in my mind are lyrically inclined
I almost stop time with every single rhyme

You know it's no crime
I keep on blowin' up like star fireworks on the 4th of July!
Why? Because I'm just that nice, I'm cold as ice
I'm hot as spice, man you know my price?

You can't afford me now
I already got the crown, I'm king of the town and I got the best sound
Don't even need a mic because my brain speaks for me
All these other rappers do is bore me; phony!

Complex to simple, simple to complex
Within any context, I'm the absolute best
On top of the chain like a Tyrannosaurus Rex
What did you expect...any less? NOPE!







This is just a preview for my full motion picture
Returnin' to the silver screen, living through a scripture
Written on a tablet engraved in my soul

Wait for new verses...and watch it unfold...

Author notes

I'm usually the intricate lyricist but I haven't written in years...I been listening to a lot of LL Cool J, Run DMC, KRS-One -- the old hip-hop -- the hip-hop where you pretty much talk about how sick of a rapper you are, how much better you are than the next guy. Profanity free and decent rhymes too, surprised myself lol. Straight out of 1989, New-York lol. The last 4 lines were just like a 'stay tuned' kind of thing.

It's not the best...not in the least. I just need to write some more and get back into the game, and I think these light lyrics are a little refreshing from the garbage that others write verses about and what's on the radio. This is very LIGHT...nothing too heavy in this verse. The rhythm was easy for me to find and any half-decent rappers will be able to find the flow easily. ENJOY!

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  • Freestyle Bushido
    July 20, 2008

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    this was good, like the vibe of these lines, kinda has that east coast feel to it. thanks for entering.

  • limechic
    July 8, 2008

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    yayy i like this one!! i was wondering when you'd get back into rap/hip hop. i like the rhyming in it...works well. right from the beginning i could tell this wouldnt be one of your usual poems lol. good work!!