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Brazen

 

Barbwire bound and brazen

                    I strut sexual...

Tearing strips of demure denim

An exposé of flaunting flesh

 

Your breath baited beyond desire,

inhaling my sensual scent

An aroma of feminine flirtation

sending your senses soaring

 

Feverish need now rising,

nudging hard upon soft skin

I take firm your fervor

stroking fire within

                    seconds of sin

 

Bent forward in perfect pose

you brush past blushed petals,

to pert places reared ready

Penetrating the less explored

 

As pounding resonates raucous

in our breathless bodies,

this moment of

                erotic interruption

                                  erupts

 

 

 

 

 

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Barbs_and_Roses_by_cosfrog

(you asked for it... lol)

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  • gllarso
    September 24
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    Deffinately earned the gold here, I love your imagery and metaphors throughout this piece. Perfect flow from begining to end. Love it, and I hunger for more.
    -Garret

  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 29

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    Congrats on the gold!

    Hmmm not commented on this before You really have made it sound beautiful...love the descriptions (and feverishly making notes ) Very sensual indeed! But so well written hun, congrats on the gold!

  • chiefmac
    July 19

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    Very sensual and the metphor for sharing passions fire stimulates the mind. Great descriptions and the reader is carried to places watched in the privacy of home. This works smoothly from stanza to stanza building tempo and excitement.Well worth Gold Trophy


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 16

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    HOT!!

    This was excellent! I could feel it speaking to me, great use of imagery and terminology, a masterpiece!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • CinfullyDelicious gold member
    July 14

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    love all the language in this sis...HOT and sensual in places too, mostly wonderful flow, which erotica needs...and attention grabbing..a must hehe..awesomeness



    Cind


  • jadedsnapdragon silver member
    July 12
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    Really couldn't get any better than this, great job!


  • Valley Girl silver member
    July 10

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    Wow! This is frigging hott! From the pic to the words! You have really excelled Auntie J! Congratulations on the Gold! ♥


  • Amera gold member
    July 10

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    I see why this won gold! This is fantastic! It's sensual, passionate and filled with imagery. It is truly an art to write an erotic poem and make it beautiful avoiding ant smut. I was going to add you to my favorites list and now this poem clenches it. I;m only sorry I haven't had time to do it sooner.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 10
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    Well, that was a real, royal, rouser, that one were!


  • faderman1959 silver member
    July 9

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    This is the best erotic poem I have ever read! I am breathless from it! I will have to bookmark this! WOW!


  • PerfectImperfection
    July 9

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    Ooooh! Can I PLEASE borrow this muse you try and say is not working? lmao

    This is just, WOW! A tantalizing piece of seduction, and intrigue. Very well penned!!! Congrats on the shiny - you certainly deserved it!


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 9

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    Wow! What a take on the pic! Congrats on the well deserved gold.


  • Ravensdark
    July 8

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    Definately deserving of the Gold trophy. It flows very well and the imagery is stirring and sensual to say the very least. Beautifully written. Tis the stuff wet dreams are made of....


  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 8
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    Gorgeous Gold

    something to send my senses soaring.
    Perfectly poetic.

    Yeh, I like it.


  • Pretani gold member
    July 8

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    Marvellous Jackie! What a take on the pic - look out for this typo though "inhaling my sensual sCent" - congrats on the gold - golden gal!


  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 8
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    Yep, yep, yep... Pure gold
    Ken

  • JWGoethe
    July 8
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    As always, I am left breathless by your eroticism, so tasteful and naughty at the same time. Hot

  • solo wisp gold member
    July 8

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    heheh ... I see you haven't lost your sensual touch ... steamy, steamy, steamy ...

    'Your breath baited beyond desire'

    ahhhhhhhhhh.

    Beautifully animalistic.

    Congrats on the Gold my Kiwi Queen ...


  • crimsondew silver member
    July 8
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    Beautiful sensual write here..super vocabulary...
    A gold so well deserved! congrats!


  • Ashleigh London
    July 8

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    LOVE IT! That picture is so clever and you piece has so much... edge and yet at the same time there is a HINT of elegance and romance and I just think that's so brilliant! Congrats on the gold trophy darling. Well done!

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 8

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    Oh my, whew! is it hot in here, or is it just me? Yeah, I would have given you gold as well for this steamy write.


  • runewalker gold member
    July 8
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    that woke me up. Take more trips, please. I am begging.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 8
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    guess you gave it!

    l.o.l. hot! and sticky! l.o.l. like I like it! congrats on the gold my friend!


  • markgrif gold member
    July 8

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    My how your writing seems to have grown.
    This was hot.

    Congrats on the gold.

  • michael thomas
    July 8
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    nicely done. congratulations.


  • Weltt silver member
    July 8
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    This is what I was looking for. Perfection penned here. plain and simple!


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 8

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    hehehe ok now this indeed is steamier and way too hot to handle on this cold Melbourne night all alone Gee I wonder who I can visualize with this one!!! Love, C

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 8

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    Oh my word ha that is a good piece here for this contest I wish you much luck with this tempting tale lol much love always


  • SweetXDestiny silver member
    July 8
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    w0w

  • Carolina Moon silver member
    July 8

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    wow my friend, you are back with a vengence lol Very steamy and sensual write! (Good to see you're back yay)


  • poppa silver member
    July 8

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    Wow ...very seductive indeed .."an aroma of feminine flirtation" my favourite line ....good luck in the contest

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