Frame of mind in tatters
in shades of cyanide blue,
all tangled in misconceptions,
that all lead back to you
Foraging for the answers
hidden in courses time,
where nothing makes any sense,
and all the words don’t rhyme
A tremble of a fingertip
tingles to the bone,
lost in this drifting mind,
in the shadows all alone
A contest entry
- Quickie, loves♥ by innocence jaded.xx.
450 points, ended July 8, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is lovely
I enjoyed this write very much did you play music to this one
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Ahmazingg; I loved it. It was so powerful & I really liked your take on the picture. Thank you so much for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥
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So much sadness and emotions felt in your poem
The last stanza is wonderful lost in thought
Best wishes to you
Julie
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