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Me and My reflection2

While all alone I was in my thoughts,
A voice said,"Hey!!!!! Ask me your question."
"Who?Where....." I asked in surprise,
"Here", It said "in the mirror....Your reflection."

"Well" I said ," I am all alone,
No one I could tell my feelings to."
"Hey gurl you mean I'm not there?
C'mon now that's not true."

"Ah.....yea kinda but...er.....
Ok tell me why m i always blamed?"
"You know ....sometimes.... it is that way
Confusions and all raged up and flamed."

"I meet people and then lose em...Why??"
"Well think of the awesome time you once had,
What if you had never met them?
That way I say losing is not that bad.

In fact some never find many people
Their luck is low and damn,
In that case aren't you lucky gurl?"
"Yea....er.....Yea I am...I actually am...

But when i need no one stands for me?
For them i stand strong and stone."
"Silly gurl.Never expect anyone to stand for you,
Stand for yourself...Stand for your own."

"Ok so what you mean is when I'm in need...
The only one who will help is ME?"
"Ahan...Now you have hit it gurl...."
"sorry to interrupt...but.....Am I....pretty?"

"Oh....but i don't know this for I am you,
But remember everyone is very special.
What you have, others wont and vise-versa,
So Just know that you are beautiful."

"Hey...I feel so much more better now,
Thank.....HEY where r u??Gone already?"
But before my thanks was said
I found myself once again all by me.

Be it a dream,
Be it all part of my hallucination,
But sometimes all you need,
Is a talk with your REFLECTION.....

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i just wrote this one for myself when i was really sad and this one lifts up my spirit very well

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  • crazymomma
    August 19, 2008

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    Besides a few spelling errors this is great. Very unique and creative. I would much like to have seen it without the chat speak and proper spelling but the story is so great I love it anyway. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Sticks-And-Stones
    July 8, 2008
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    Thanks for sharing this! Good luck in the contest!