I want the impossible...
every time it seems
i want too much
i hate too much
I just want love...
A contest entry
- Liquified Touch 20/20 by Gypsie Ink.
450 points, ended July 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think in general? Improvements?
Comments
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Emotional
An endearing write. I believe we all want the impossible. Thank you for your entry and best of luck.

